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I had the song playing in the background as I read this and it was so much more haunting with it. Great job. I hate it when Marie and Logan don't end up together but I loved the way your story turned out. Awesome!
Not sure I *like* when Logan is such a...a...slave to his feelings/need for Marie. I like the honorable, straightforward, 'Cyke can go screw himself I love her' Logan. This wishy washy, can't make up his mind, have his cake and eat it too just isn't MY cup of Logan. But the story was powerful, well written and very heartwrenching, GREAT JOB!!
As well-written as it is, this story has proved to me once and for all that I really don't like the ones where Logan is such a desperate slave to his craving for Marie that he loses all sense of honor or decency. I feel the same way about pathetic, suicidal Marie.
But, as they say, different strokes for different folks. --Wendie
Author's Response: I know this was very dark and sad, but I felt like I needed to explore that facet of Logan and Rogue's relationship. Glad you reviewed even when you didn't like it; I truly appreciate. Free
Wow, this is intense, superbly written and heart-breaking. You describe the desperation of all three characters so well I felt I was suffering along with them.
There are countless powerful lines, but my fav was this rather melancholy line: “Not mine to lose or keep, not mine to fight for; he belongs to her, always have.”
Author's Response: ^^ So glad you liked it. Your reviews are always so invigorating...! Next time I will try something more... happy I guess? Hoping you like it as well.