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Date: 05/28/2011 4:24:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yessss finally someone punched Jean.
Love your 'morning after'.
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2010 9:54:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
More reviews for you because I´m loving this. I wanted to send you 1 review for chapter, but I´m sooo into the reading that I don´t even want to stop to review. ahahaha Sorry!
I will just say that I´m loving this story and how you´re writting it.
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Im grateful for any review you give. Gracias.
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2010 3:25:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
the last 2 chapters were kinda sad ( u know what parts im talking about) and anyway........what happned to that condom that he had? did her foget about it?
Author's Response: No, he didnt. :~)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2010 4:02:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! Incredible! You write their scenes together with such tenderness and beauty - I bow before your superior talent! Please don't leave us too long before updating this. I don't want to rush you - perfection takes time, I know - but I am having withdrawal symptoms!
Author's Response: Okay, so I had to wipe my eyes after reading this review. Wimpy, I know, but there you have it. Thank you so much. And its too early for me to be positive, but Im reasonably sure/hopeful itll be up by Saturday...>wince< Im probably jinxing myself. But I promise: I wont forget about it, and I write as much as I can every day. :-)
Date: 06/20/2010 10:50:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
I've re-read the whole thing just so I can get a better feel of the story as a whole (am still struggling doing it in chapters especially the back and forth of this one!) there’s a slight repetitiveness with the changing from one pov to the other, but it’s needed, there are two sides to each coin and we’re getting to see how one set of circumstances are felt/dealt with/misunderstood etc from R & L
The emotion you’re conveying to the reader is wonderful. You feel like you’re there with them seeing/feeling etc.
I hope in your plans there is more for Jean – one blow/hit ....... not enough!!!!!!!!
Great stuff keep it up, hope your grandmothers ok x
Author's Response: Thank you, a thousand times, for everything you wrote. Im happy you like it...and Im sorry about breaking that little "Once-A-Week" promise. This fic, however, is a bit of an exception, since each half is about the length of a normal chapter. Two-In-One, like shampoo & conditioner. Very economical.
Date: 06/20/2010 6:03:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
I was sooooo happy when I saw you'd updated this story! I'm having such a busy, fun-packed weekend and yet quietly reading this story with a steaming mug of tea is one of the highlights (I know, Comic-cake is slightly bonkers when it comes to the Rogan world, and in particular, this story).
The most outstanding part was how you describe Rogue's pain at the beginning. How do you write so incredibly well that I feel like my heart is breaking for her?
"But those shelves are just dead wood, like the books they hold. Cold and indifferent pillars on a jailhouse. They're nothing." I love lines like this, they're so clever, setting this anguish-filled scene so perfectly.
"I'll beg. I'll say-I'll say he can sleep with Jean, if he-if he really needs to. It's okay. It's okay. He can do whatever he wants. As long as he stays. As long as I can look at him. And hear his voice. And maybe-maybe hold his hand". - her desperation is so clearly demonstrated here that I want to cry for her. Seriously, I just want to break down and sob. But I'm not going to because my best friend is on her way round as I type this and she might think I've gone insane when I try to explain what has upset me so much. :-)
Under normal circumstances I'd cheer when Rogue hits Jean. But in this case, I'm feeling so much agony for Rogue that I can't even be happy about that.
"Slow, Logan tells himself, not entirely sure of the word's definition. You have to take things slow with this one. Careful. Slow. Slow. Slow." - lovely line, I can imagine Wolvie having this inner battle with himself.
And I've done it again. I've written another ridiculously long review. How do you manage to make me do that? Oh, that's right, it's because you are an amazing writer. x
Author's Response: Okay, so I cant give you my first born. But how will I ever explain to my future husband that I have to name our child Comic-Cake?..."But honey, its so exotic. All the other moms are doing it."....Seriously, thank you. I shouldnt be so greedy with your undeserved flattery, but I am. It makes weeks of glaring at paper worth it. >hugs<
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2010 2:37:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! You describe the scenes so well, the shower part was simply h-o-t XD!... cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! >hugs< Ya know, I almost apologized in the chapter for the smutty section. I was worried people wouldn't like it. :~)
Date: 06/20/2010 2:03:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow did she kill Jean?
Author's Response: No. Unfortunately. :~)
Date: 06/19/2010 7:39:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh mess how I desperately want a happy ending for them :(
If this is what you give us after an extended period of time then it's worth it. This is quality. Everything you described felt tangible. It's by far the most visual chapter so kudos.
There are so many things that stood out to me here, but the one thing that I have to mention that appealed to the part of me that probably needs therapy was the Great Decking of Jean Grey. Holy crap was that satisfying!!! - wouldn't have been if you hadn't written it so clearly. Blows my 'tossing her out of the jet' out of the water.
Also a personal fave: "Logan is torn between saying, 'aw', and pinning her to the wall." Had to genuinely laugh out loud at that one. Pretty accurately describes Logan in most fics. You got it in one ;p
*here's hoping for happy endings & kittens*
Author's Response: Author Response? What? Are you blind? ....huh?...Oh! You mean you cant see me dancing and running around my house, screaming, 'yes!'? Oops. My bad....>dances, screams< Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Date: 06/19/2010 6:54:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! I just...I'm gonna cry. Okay, I already did that. Sorry, but the nice stuff under the horrible, scarring stuff didn't quite cut it. I'm gonna cry for YEARS!!!
At the same time, this just gives me more reason to vent my Jean-rage in my own story. Thanks!
Author's Response: Okay, so I totally shouldnt be this happy about making you cry. Its sick. Really sick. But I am. Im proud-and please dont take that in the wrong way. Im just glad a story of mine could be capable of bringing tears-for anything other than crappy writing. Thank you, and good luck with the Jean bashing. She deserves it,
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2010 5:42:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, he actually left.
Author's Response: Its not over. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2010 5:20:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh wow. what an awesome chapter. the angst and the hawtness. gah, i hate having to wait, but it makes it so much more worth it.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!! ....From now on, Im going to spell hot that way.