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Date: 05/28/2011 3:57:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
sweet, realistic and hot - perfect
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2011 8:50:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow that was soooo yummy!!! Loved it. i almost forgot how sad the story was
Date: 06/20/2010 9:07:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
"He doesn't eat kittens!" Had to point out that I re-read this (As I am wont to do with your fics) and caught this. Of course I giggled. I'm enjoying how kittens are the new easter eggs ;)
Author's Response: I'd absolutely love to not say anything, just let it slide and claim that clever line as my own, but I have to give credit where its due. Some very generous person put that up for adoption on Nanowrimo.
Date: 06/17/2010 9:58:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is awesome! The flashbacks of how they got together are so sweet and in complete opposition to the heartbreaking, gut-wrenching present. I really love the way you write their POVs - so realistic and compelling. This yet another great story that you have created, just like Heal Over and Science Geek Series.
I'm relieved that you are 85% (only 85%?!) sure of a happy ending. But, if you're still entertaining thoughts of tossing a coin to determine the outcome, then I've got a double-headed coin for you to use and I'm calling "heads" for a happy ending. ;)
Author's Response: Hey!! Thank you so so so so so much. This was the perfect thing to hear (read), since I always worry about a story the more time it takes for me to update. (Btw: finished latest chapter. You should see by tomorrow). >hugs tightly< Im incredibly grateful, and Im now 90% sure about that ending. Warning: its gonna get worse before it gets better.
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 2:46:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
this could be a really good movie!
Author's Response: Lol!!! Thank you! Im struggling with this next chapter, but you should see it by Saturday.
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 2:45:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
this could be a really good movie!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2010 5:41:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is brilliant. I love how you give flashbacks and both points of view. At first it was confusing but then I got used to the patterns... I love where this is going. I wanna know how she lost the baby and how long he's going to be gone and if she goes batshit fucking insane without him...
Author's Response: >squeals< Thanks!! I'm thrilled that you feel that way....And, if it helps, you'll find an explanation of the format & different symbols in the notes of the first chapter. (It goes: Marie present, Logan present, Marie past, Logan past.)
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2010 5:38:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! A story with two halves! First half - intense, shocking and incredibly strong. Poor Logan - I really felt for him. Second half - sweet, touching and sexually powerful. Logan in love makes for one of the best story-lines! I am so loving this story - please continue!
Author's Response: I know. As you can see from the first chapter, each chapter is supposed to have two halves. But I would have been bleeding out my eyes if I had tried to type up the previous segments together-they were just too long. But anyhoo, thank you so, so much for this. >hugs, gives cupcake with white chocolate & sprinkles<
Date: 06/06/2010 5:37:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love this chapter so much that I felt a loss when I reached the end. In fact, I adore this entire story and I think I'm going to go back to the start and read it again, just to keep me going until you can update.
The way you describe her pain in the beginning is incredible, for example - "My lips part and a black bile rises up from the wound, spill out into the air like poison."
"Wait. Does he--does he actually think I'm capable of talking? I can't remember where my vocal chords are, let alone how to use them." - and that is precisely how I'd feel if Logan had just kissed me. If only... ;-)
""Kid." Probably not the best choice of nicknames right now." - true, but adorable all the same.
"Marie is with her friend Jubilee. That irritating loudmouth who drives him up a wall in practice. He'd known Brooklyn hookers who were less shrill" - hahahahahaha!
Okay, I'll stop quoting your entire story, try to stop feeling jealous that I can't write as amazingly as you, and wrap up this review:
Love it!
Author's Response: Hmm...I don't think cupcakes are enough. Would you care for a first born? Lol. Thank you so much. And btw: I've read alot of your stuff, and you are an excellent writer.
Date: 06/06/2010 4:20:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Just now I'm sorry I can read english but can't write it correctly.
I would like to say how much I love your story. Please, please, more.
Author's Response: >hugs< Thank you so much for reviewing. I love you for it! Next update: Saturday.
Date: 06/05/2010 11:53:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
i think u r been realitic with the characters. rogue been upset the miscarage and jean's betrayal, just made her say stuff she did not mean.now logan is broken too. as for that bitch jean i hope she gets wots coming to her
Author's Response: Thank you. "Realistic" is the best adjective a writer can hear. :-)
Date: 06/05/2010 6:51:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hey! Just love it so far! I almost cried my eyes out reading the first part of the chapter...The way you describe Logan and Marie's respective pained points of view just works for me.
Still I wonder how the baby came to "happen", as they used a condom...Something you want to tell the readers in the next chapter? Can't wait to read for more!
Author's Response: Thanks uber much, I'm so glad you like it. But I'm afraid anything I say about the "happening" will spoil it. But I promise, I'm not making it up as I go. ;-)
Date: 06/05/2010 5:26:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I just read what you have written so far! Its heartbreaking! I really really hate Jean. I really hope Logan figures out what she is doing before he leaves. What a horrible woman to take advantage of both Logan and Marie's agony over losing their baby. Please let one of them figure it out before its too late. Love the alternating views on this too. Its really sexy and sweet at the same time.
Author's Response: Oh, mess. >hugs, dances< Thanks a whole bunch for this. It takes longer, but I really like doing both POV's. You couldn't see the whole story without it. And I agree; Jean really needs to get punched in the face. Hmmmm...>plots<
Date: 06/05/2010 5:18:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Invisible cupcakes! Not only did you write a great chapter, but you just came up with a desert that won't make me & my scale hate myself tomorrow. You're a genius :)
I have to say that I personally like how you divided up the chapter. I'm a "give me the bad news first" kind of girl, so I enjoyed ending with a sweeter memory of theirs. Hate what they're going through in "real time" though, but stoked that there's an 85% chance of some happiness.
I also have to say that when it comes to capturing emotions & the mental frailty of anyone in these circumstances, you couldn't do any better. The miscommunication, overwhelming inability to process anything, desperate need to just shut down. It's all there & as usual for you, written quite well :)
Author's Response: Oh my god, Marry me! (Lmao)....Thank you. It was either a cupcake or a kitten, but I figured ya'll wouldn't have to deal with invisible hairballs with this....I'm glad you liked the format. I didn't want reader to think I was skipping ahead, and like you said, I leave off with a smile so things werent entirely miserable....Again thank you, so much. >hugs< I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2010 4:32:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love, love, love it! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'll try for a update by Saturday.