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Date: 05/28/2011 3:39:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
Logan running on instinct...
Date: 05/30/2010 10:54:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
Another wonderful chapter. I really like how you retell the same part of the story from both sides, I find it incredibly insightful and I love knowing exactly what they're both thinking at the same exact time. I also love that they keep assuming the wrong thing about the other person, it's so well written.
Fave line: "You wanna hold this for me?" I think I awww'd out loud, it was so sweet!
As always I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for updates :)
Author's Response: Muchas Gracias. >hugs, gives labrador< I've got a huge grin on my face. I'm so glad you like it. Next update...Saturday-ish.
Date: 05/30/2010 1:02:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
Oh, I loved this chapter so, so much, it made my heart warm and my skin tingle. Rogue is perfectly portrayed; so unsure of herself and reading between the lines of every situation (like all girls do, I guess). The way you write their differing interpretations of each scene is brilliantly done and I just adored the way you described their first kiss, so perfect depicted. I know I am gushing, but I feel like I can’t praise this chapter enough.
Fav lines:
“He just needs to stop--get them out of this confined space, to somewhere the air doesn't taste so much like her.”
“Scooter doesn't remember that territory disputes go out the window the moment the alpha dog shows up.” – haha!
And now I’m off to google the ‘love calculator’...
Author's Response: Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!!! >continues to squeal happily< And you can always, always gush. I've said it before, but I was worried about this chapter; I didnt think people would like it. Thank you so much. You're pimpalicious. And I'm about to go buy more pens, so I can started on the next section. (Shorter, quicker, and hopefully better).
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2010 5:04:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
I absolutely love this story! God, I wish I could write like this - it's so beautifully written and full of everything that makes the relationship between Logan and Marie so special. The words you use are so descriptive that I actually feel as though I'm there - and that I could just reach out and touch the characters. Amazing talent! Please continue, because I really need to know why Logan stopped - the fool!!
Author's Response: I had been kinda worried/unsatisfied with this chapter. Im so glad you liked it. >hugs< Thank you. This made me feel alot better.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2010 11:19:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
STOPS?? STOPSS? GAAAAAAAH... *implodes*
grrr
Author's Response: Ive never been happier to see someone implode. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2010 4:24:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
Stops?! no i don't think that i agree with that decision. xXx
Author's Response: Lol. Neither do I. >pulls out notebook and pen<
Date: 05/28/2010 8:49:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART TWO
Yay! I missed this! Absolutely well worth the wait. I like how you can see the beginnings of their history with miscommunication - her insecurity w/ her fighting & how impressed he is with her.
You capture their POVs so perfectly. So he strips down before she knocks on his door, eh? Hmm. I'd wake up early for that too.
Favorite line: "The bigger question is: why would she choose a story that makes her cry, over a man who never would?" Direct, simple, & heartbreaking. Although I'm greedy, I'll manage another long wait if you keep churning out awesomeness like this!
Author's Response: Omg. >hugs very very very very very tightly< I can't tell you how glad I was to read this. I stressed a bit over this one. Thank you...and I think you'll see the next update in a week. >winces, knocks on wood<