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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2012 11:29:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

Ooooh, I hate Jean.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2011 3:03:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

That BITCH!!!!!!

*wants to kill Jean*

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2011 8:30:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

pure awesomeness...a little different than your average stories but VERY good

Reviewer: LeeMinKyo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 8:24:41 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love misunderstandings like this. And I´m a bitch, but I love to see them suffer like this. Bring the Angst, I love it!!

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou! Its great that you like angst, cuz this fic is chocobox full of it.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 11:56:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

new chapter soon. really really soon. pretty please?

Author's Response: Thanks so much, that is really encouraging. Im guestimating the next update should come Friday/Saturday-ish.

Reviewer: Wolverette Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 3:46:57 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

God, I just love this story! So beautifully written and full of emotion! I am so glad Logan didn't give in to Jean - she's such a cold-hearted bitch!
Please, please continue - my life is bereft without this story!

Author's Response: Lol! >screams happily at computer< I think thats one of the most awesome things I've ever been told. You made my day. Thanks.

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 10:12:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

jesus, i think i ran out of tissue. *sobs*

Author's Response: Sorry!!! >hands roll of toilet paper< Wanna borrow my Teddy Bear?

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 9:10:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

This is so full of angst it has left me feeling wretched inside. Honestly, I’m going to have to find a funny story to read or eat a big bar of chocolate or something to make me feel happy again! What amazing writing to have that effect. I LOVE this story!

Fave line: His cheek resting on her hair, which smells like everything else in this room-sadness.

I can’t wait for more...

Author's Response: Ohh!! I'm so sorry. >hugs, hands brownie< I wish I could have had part 2 ready; its much much happier. If it helps, that'll be up soon and I'll inject lots of kittens and smiles.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 4:22:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

The detachment and going through the motions was heartbreaking to read but very 'real' – Please tell me Jean will get her comeuppance – she truly is a bitch and a half in this and everyone knows I hate her anyway but your just proving my point here. Maime her, kill her, slowly and very painfully at the end of shiny pointy claws.....Have Rogue watch, join in and smile....have Jean cry,beg and die painfully (sorry I got a bit sidetracked) anyway.....Great instalment now on with the next bit!

Author's Response: Rofl. I'll see what I can do; thanks. :~)

Reviewer: mina113er Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 3:24:42 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

I love this story.
Please update soon.

Author's Response: >hugs< Thank you, I will.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 2:25:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

Wow. This is fantastic. I love how its from both their point of views. I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Next update should be quick.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 11:36:26 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

Loved this! More please!

Author's Response: Thank you--more very soon!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 10:27:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

I spent this entire chapter wishing I could RIP JEAN'S THROAT OUT! Every word of this was like a knife twisting in my guts. I hate that Marie won't even start to give Logan the benefit of the doubt. I hate that Logan isn't equipped emotionally to find a way to reach her. I hate that Jean is manipulating them both for her own evil ends. But I LOVE THIS STORY!

So, I just now, after reading over the previous paragraph, had a thought. Is Megabitch using these twisted therapy sessions to convince Rogue that Logan hates her? If so, then I say, Logan, my good man, spirit your mate away to some lonely outpost--far away from the she-devil--and do your growly best to convince her otherwise! Then go back and gut the bitch! Or not. --Wendie

Author's Response: Oh, I think we all wish that. Thank you, and yes, you hit the nail on the bitch's head. Jean's such a fun bad guy, don't you agree? ;~)

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 9:49:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

Good lord I can't tell you how relieved I am that Logan didn't go through with it. When I first read that from Marie's perspective it made me a little sick.

There's so much desperation between these two, especially the scene in the beginning and you manage to convey that so well without actually saying that. Sigh, they need to communicate so badly. And Jean needs to be thrown off of the Blackbird.

Author's Response: Before I wrote the chapter, I was actually planning for him to. But, as it turns out Jean/Logan sex makes me sick too. Thank you for the feedback! Super muchas gracias.

Reviewer: Valkyrie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 9:47:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

God, I hate Jean. You're doing a great job here. I never knew I could hate Jean more than I do now.
This story is truly beautiful. The misunderstandings of miscommunication between Logan and Marie are beautifully written. Keep this up cause I'm loving it!

Author's Response: Aaaaghh!!! Thank you so much. >hugs< Im so glad you like it.

Reviewer: IzzySparrow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 9:40:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

Omg.....This made in to a big pile of emo mush!

Can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Emo? Not sure if thats a good thing. :~) If it helps, I'm really leaning toward a happy ending. Gracias!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 8:31:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE

wow OMG that was so.... I'm teary eyed, there was just so much angst. Please update soon, I hope Logan touches her so she can realize how much he loves her. I really hope this is a happy ending. more please soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I'm reasonably sure this will have a happy ending.

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