When this all started, I never expected Remy to play such a large role, but I like what you're doing with the characters and their relationships. I'm looking forward to when the end of 'The Patient' meets up with the events of this story, when not one, not two, but three men are all competing for Marie's heart.

This image was exceptional: "but the salt in the air was like an albatross on his chest." Very cool. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm so glad to hear that your enjoying this. There's still a lot more surprises in store. Sorry to dissapoint a little but, this series will end at the ending of the second chapter in the Patient. The next series will tie in both stories. Hope you enjoy I still have quite a lot of twist comming into play!

You definitely need a good beta, who can focus on mis-spelled words and punctuation. You have many, many run-on sentences, which make it confusing to read. Your content is damned good! I'm hooked into the story, even if the missing punctuation and typos are distracting.
If a beta doesn't appear, e-mail me - I'll give it a go with you.
wolf755@hotmail.com
Keep up the good work! I really like the way this story is developing.

Author's Response: thank you for your review and I'm glad your enjoying let me know if you can beta the last chapter for me it's almost done.