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Im really liking the feel of this one! :D Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks for the review next chapter up, hope you enjoy!
I've never seen Scott and Logan portrayed this way before and I have to say I like it. They're both right, each in their own way, but Logan is also wrong to lose control so much that he would threaten a teammate. Very nicely done. I look forward to more. --Wendie
Author's Response: I wanted for Scott to come across as conflicted cause this is his family, but he also has a responsibilty to the team. and Logan's has only one idea in his head to get Marie back at any cost. Hope you enjoy what's to come.
I really like where this story is going. It has massive amounts of potential. But I must say, the chapters are way too short. This is the first time I think I have read short chapters and actually had the urge to continue the story in my own twisted mind before you get the other chapters up. *shrugs* I'm a freak. But I hope you update soon! With longer chapters!
Author's Response: I'm so glad your enjoying it. Sorry about the short chapter but I think I can make them a bit longer we'll see hope you enjoy this next one.
Love the depiction of logan. I can picture his rage and the fact that you made him so stubborn actually reminds me of the comic version more than the movie. Post quickly!
Author's Response: I know that's what I was going for. and I have a few surprises if you follow the comics at all. enjoy!rnrn