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Date: 10/04/2010 4:07:15 PM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
Oh, breathtakingly beautiful!I keep loving "LoganS' girls", how much consideration shows in the trio's characterisation. Great how each plays a role and yet never becomes a type, wonderful to see Kitty getting some space in this, relievingly interesting how the "barfly incid could ent" is resolved. (I never did believe that Logan of the staunch loyalties would be someone to fall for the "oops, I cheated" dumbness.)
Hm, and Callum really stps at nothing mean. Will Rogue feel betrayed? It would provide her with a feasible reason forLogan not meeting her eyes when he went from her and with KitKat. I wonder what Callum thinks her reaction will be. Demure heartbreak, probably. Has he ever seen Rogue throw a good honest fit? This might be a great chance. Go on Rogue, you can't have forgotten all your instincts, you KNOW the difference between an up-front fighter and a mean-spirited, crawling, spineless... but I get carried away. Yayy hobbits! :-)
Date: 10/01/2010 2:16:44 AM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
So the truth finally comes out in another great chapter. I've been wondering how he could have possibly cheated on her when it seemed so out of character - too cruel and selfish - since he obviously adores her. And now we find out why and it makes perfect sense. I could totally see Logan sabotaging the relationship out of a desperate need to protect the woman he loves and his belief that he doesn't deserve her. You really did an excellent job conveying how he was driven by love, fear and self-loathing to make the biggest mistake of his life. That's a pretty intense combination that could cause anyone to do something stupid but with good intentions. And besides, Logan has never been shy about sacrificing himself for her.
I really liked how you wrote Kitty as the voice of reason and someone that Logan trusts and can confide in. You did an excellent job of portraying the close relationship between Kitty and her "sensei" - great reference back to the comics too. As for Logan, you really captured his voice and the scene perfectly.
On a side note, when I got the alert that you had updated I was totally psyched, not only because you had updated but also because I was alerted that you had posted three chapters (#30-32) instead of one. When I got to the website I realized that I had been duped by the WRFA gremlins again. Damn you, WRFA gremlins, and your cruel, teasing ways!!! ;) Anyway, this chapter and your excellent writing completely alleviated my initial desire for vengence against the gremlins.
Date: 09/30/2010 12:56:19 PM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
Oh mess. I'm conflicted. Not about your writing - that's always superb. I don't know how I feel about what Logan did. I don't want him to easily be forgiven for it, but it kinda makes sense (Exhibit #55642 of how your writing rocks right there). Did you plan it this way all along? Very interesting.
Date: 09/30/2010 3:18:02 AM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
That chapter was so awesome! You have wolvie's inner voice down to a tee. Now if only Callum had been using video or audio, because I'm sure Marie would love to listen to that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2010 10:09:41 PM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
You took Logan to a place I don't think I've ever seen him go before and you did it without losing a single iota of his personality. I had a horrible suspicion that he'd done the redheaded barfly for 'noble' reasons, so that part wasn't a shock. Now, Callum and his goddamn camera phone, however...that was a nasty sucker punch I didn't see coming...I look forward to that prick being systematically dismantled by Logan and his Hell's Belles. Gleefully so. --Wendie
Date: 09/29/2010 8:47:59 PM Title: Some Sin For Nothing
I have no review. I have no advice. Simply; Yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhhh!
~Mia