Reviews For Crossing the Styx
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Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 10:04:41 AM Title: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

loooooooooove it

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 5:10:12 PM Title: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

Love this story...keep up the great work!

Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 3:48:29 PM Title: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

Awesome twist, these doctors I think are worse than Stryker!! I cant wait to read what will happen next!!

Author's Response: Hahaha!! (evil laugh) Wait till you see next chapter!

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 2:32:44 PM Title: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

Wow, this is powerful writing! And I, for one, welcome the darkness and will continue to follow this amazing story.

The way you wrote Logan’s swift and uncontrollable change to ‘feral’ was brilliantly done, also how you showed the tougher side of Marie, aka Rogue, coming through was portrayed excellently.

Fav line: “Then there were his heartbeats: strong and calm, deep sounds that made Rogue think of an antique war drum.”

I eagerly look forward to your next update...

Author's Response: Thank you!! I got inspired from a few other lab related fics across the net... Hope I did justice to the Masters. (Though the drum-thing is 100% me ^^)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 1:38:22 PM Title: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

'Intense' is a vast understatement, but I can't think of anything else to say right now. Please tell me that vicious bitch Dr. Mann will die with a huge smile on her face for all the sweet pain Logan will inflict on her. Let it be thus for Dr. Montgomery, too.

So, I'm guessing the syringe was filled with embryos created from Rogue's eggs that had been previously harvested and fertilized, because Mann and Montgomery couldn't take the chance that she wouldn't get pregnant through the 'usual channels'? Or did I miss something?

Anyway, so glad you updated and can't wait for more! --Wendie

Author's Response: You got it right Wendie, at list for scientific part. I am no scientist, so I had to do some research about this, hoping that I had it right...I'm more on the literary side ^^. Glad you liked it!!

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