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[Report This]Date: 04/28/2010 3:28:31 AM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
p.s. super grossed out by old Dr. Mann's (pun on her name perhaps?) attraction to Wolverine.
like he'd have that sadistic old hag...not even with a machine gun pointed to his head lol
Author's Response: Then you should read next chapter...! Or maybe not........
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2010 3:26:33 AM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
yeh, Xavier! feel guilty, you should! grrr!
and i always love Hank, he's such a stand-up and good man, fur and all! can't wait for an update!
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2010 2:57:32 AM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
woohoo! cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for following!! =D
Date: 04/27/2010 9:31:25 PM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
I love the idea that Logan now remembers everything. And hurrah for Hank, he will find them. I have faith. I hadn't realized Marie had been in captivity that long if she has been gone two years!
Author's Response: In fact she's been gone only a year... She left about a year after Logan's departure. Sorry if I didn't express it well enough, I tend to be confused with dates and numbers in general!
Date: 04/27/2010 5:50:57 PM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
Sorry for the BIG spelling mistake in Moviemom44's review answer! Right = Write... Sorry, I've just woken up...
Date: 04/27/2010 3:41:19 PM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
Another great chapter. I love Logan’s POV about the situation, so well written, so true to character.
Fav line: “For one moment, one tiny little moment, he wished he had never met her, but the thought as attractive as it was remained unbearable.”
Also, Xavier’s description of Logan’s and Rogue’s relationship was wonderful and specifically, I loved this line:
“So when I proposed Logan the following day to leave for a few months, he took the opportunity for what it was: a way to preserve the one person who truly mattered to him.”
So this is turning into a story I’m craving for. No pressure from Comic-cake then! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you Comic-cake! I must admit that this chapter was kind of hard to write, especially the way Xavier perceived Logan and Marie's relationship...I wanted to make it sound like a *good* idea to leave, for Logan especially. Well, for Logan, I just let my imagination run freely! I simply have this guy under my skin (BLUSH)!!!
Date: 04/27/2010 2:34:39 PM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
OK, so you took away my Logan/Rogue smut, but I'll trade that for a determined Hank McCoy any day of the week, as long as it helps get them--and their baby--the hell away from that sadist Montgomery and his vicious skank of a girlfriend! I also love that Logan is remembering the hows and whys of getting to where he is now. I wonder, do his keepers know he is remembering? Do they want him to? More, more, more --Wendie
Author's Response: Wendie, Wendie...I can see that you are very far ahead in the story already (it's a compliment)! It's always a pleasure to read your reviews, dear. Hope to make next chapter as captivating for you. And sorry for the smut thing...But I'm just not confident enough to right one in this story; I'm too afraid to make it too flowery, or too rough. Maybe you can suggest a few things (winks) - Free-
Date: 04/27/2010 11:39:20 AM Title: Mens rea (Guilty mind)
Great chapter - needed this to set up some more plot!! Go Wolvie!
Author's Response: Hehehe... (evil laugh)! Thanks!!!