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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 1:31:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a good retelling of these scenes from the film.

I especially liked: '...his nose never lied to him. She had to be around here somewhere.' Something about that struck me funny.

I am interested to see what you do with your 'throw together version', so I'll be back for future chapters. Might I suggest a beta reader? The word 'densification' threw me for quite a loop until I realized you meant 'disinfection'. That's just the sort of thing a beta reader would catch that we as authors are sometimes unable to see because we are 'too close' to the story. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thank you and I hope you like the new chapter that will come too. Oh and I have a Beta reader, donít know why she and me oversaw it. But I appreciate your comments very much.rnrnThanks Katern

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 8:29:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. Where is Rogue?

Author's Response: Thanks, and Rogue will be making and appearance in the next chapter.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 7:32:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

goood start, cant wait to see whats next

Author's Response: Thanks.

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