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This is a good retelling of these scenes from the film.
I especially liked: '...his nose never lied to him. She had to be around here somewhere.' Something about that struck me funny.
I am interested to see what you do with your 'throw together version', so I'll be back for future chapters. Might I suggest a beta reader? The word 'densification' threw me for quite a loop until I realized you meant 'disinfection'. That's just the sort of thing a beta reader would catch that we as authors are sometimes unable to see because we are 'too close' to the story. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you and I hope you like the new chapter that will come too. Oh and I have a Beta reader, donít know why she and me oversaw it. But I appreciate your comments very much.rnrnThanks Katern