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Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 9:33:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

lol@friendship test!

i gave up on asking ppl to help me move back in 2006 when my ex-boyfriend asked me to help him move and it was probably one of the most horrible experiences ever...especially since i had moved just 2 months before and HIRED MOVERS and he made 2X as much as me and was too cheap to do the same, so me and some other ppl got conscripted into the worst 14 hours of my life.

The professional movers are coming tomorrow to move all my furniture, I've been moving boxes or smaller stuff and clothes for the last month, gonna leave the real pain in the butt stuff to the burly men while i stand there and point where it goes LOL!

As for the Rogan pics, I've seen that one from the Evolution guy before, I looooooove his artwork and that Evo depiction is what I based "Don't Let Me Catch You" on...i love how they look and sound in that show and wanted that in my story.

something about "broken nose Logan" i just adore.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 3:52:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

i looooove how you've explained how Logan's lust wanted Jean but the Wolverine couldn't care less about her...didn't even rise to the insult of her walking away without a hair out of place.


that's right...the right woman for him would be a shivering mess in his arms. god, i wish i was that woman LOL!

Author's Response: Thanks, Corinne! I really appreciate you taking time to read and review while things are still 'unsettled' for you. Moving is such a bitch. In fact, I've been known to use it as a gauge for friendship. There are good friends, great friends, dear friends and friends who will help you move. The last group are also usually the ones who will bail you out of jail.rnrnThe scene you described was one of those times when the characters surprised me. I hadn't even thought about Logan and Wolvie having different attitudes toward her until I wrote that, but then it felt really right so I went with it. And, yeah, 'quivering mess' pretty much says it all when it comes to what he could do to me!rnrnIn fact, if you're looking to do some quivering, go to Google and type in 'wolverine and rogue images' in the search bar. The links below should get you the two best pictures that come up.rnrnhttp://www.tv.com.wolverine-and-the-x-men/possible-wolverine-rogue-romance/topic/91530-1288672/msgs.html (this links to a chat board about W and R hooking up. scroll toward the bottom and you'll see it.)rnrnhttp://stevenegordon.blogspot.com/2009/03/quite-rogue.html (this is from Steven E. Gordon's website. He draws primarily for the X-Men:Evolution cartoon.)rnrnEnjoy! And thanks again! --Wendie

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 3:28:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, great! Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I've got a good start on Chapter 3 and hope to post by this weekend. --Wendie

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 9:54:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,
Great story..interesting concept with lots of layers..I like that we’re getting more background as to why Logan is stuck in the situation he’s in..and I’m very curious to find out what Jean did to Rogue.

It’s totally a testament to your talent as a writer that I can say the following..not only am I mad at this Logan, I’m kinda disgusted with him too (hate to write it- but I do have my reasons, lol). I get why he initially hooked up with Jean-the attraction, unwillingness to admit his feelings for Rogue/age issue etc, and I know why he continues to do so..it’s just..does he have to get so into it and enjoy it too? She hurt Marie (probably deliberately?) in some way..that should be the deal breaker with Jean, and yes he’s just waiting to take her down but..she still gets him hot and bothered, and apparently even thinking about their past hook-ups makes him want her again..yuck. Or, maybe I’m mad at the Wolverine for being such a horn dog LOL..but, Marie’s his girl and no amount of good sex should make up for it.
I’m sooo hoping that once we get more L/M interaction and they start getting together (I hope :)) that he just doesn’t jump from Jean’s bed to hers..she needs to make him wait and suffer lol. I mean, if the roles were reversed and Rogue was getting it on with some guy regularly only a few doors down from Logan, and it was all to save him but she was still totally enjoying it..I think there would be a pretty PO’d Wolverine. That said..you know I don’t want him to wait all thaaat long..cuz, if hate sex with Jean is this good..I’m thinking L/M will be tons hotter :D..
About Jean—what happened to Scott sounds fishy..I’m wondering if Jean had something to do with it. For me, Jean’s always just been a secondary character.I vaguely remember her in the cartoons, never read the comics, thought the Jean/Logan “relationship” in the movies was more forced than anything, and agree with you about their lack of chem., so any rendition is okay with me.
Okay, so that's my 2c worth.sorry to have made it so long but couldn't help it..I read it, had to go out and was thinking about it for a long time and wrote the review when I came back. Thank you so much for sharing this terrific story..I’m so on board and can’t wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Hey likelandm, you win the 'meaty' review award, hands down! You are a person after my own heart; I can't keep from running my fingers to the bone when I have something to say either. 'Brevity' is a foreign concept to me. Anyway, yes, it's true that Logan can still appreciate great sex regardless of who it's with. I think they call that 'compartmentalizing' and as I understand it, most men practice it regularly, so Logan is really just 'being a guy' or a 'horn dog' whichever you prefer. This, however, is not to say that he won't one day come to understand the difference between having sex and making love. You must also remember that he has yet to lay a hand on Rogue in a sexual way. Could be he just doesn't know what he's been missing! rnrnAs for the jump straight from one bed to the other. Ain't gonna happen. Logan and Marie will eventually wind up in bed together--what other kind of happy ending could there be?--but there is much yet to overcome for both of them. In Chapter 3, we will get some of Rogue's perspective on what's happening, but it will be colored by the harmful effects of Jean's skullduggery, so her view cannot be trusted to be entirely fair. The method of Jean's evil deed will be known in Ch. 3, but the details will probably not be revealed until Ch. 4. I know; I'm a rat fink. But, like Logan, I have a plan and a timetable--or rather a story outline--and, for once, I'm sticking to it!rnrnI thought about making Jean the culprit in Scott's death, but then changed my mind. Other than perhaps being a bit complacent and not 'brain scanning' the minds waiting for them at the FoH base to determine their true intentions, Jean was as surprised as the rest of them that the place was not what they expected. Truth is, I had to get rid of Scott to make this story work, so I tried to think of a fairly plausible way for a powerful X-Man such as Cyclops to be taken out.rnrnFor your outstanding and lengthy review, I will give you one 'teaser' to ponder. Who created the collage of Scott's photos and why? If you read Chapter 2 carefully, you can probably figure it out pretty easily. Once you do, keep yours eyes open for that person to enter the intrigue as well. As I said in one of my other replies to a review, Logan ain't the only one who wants to see Jean punished for her multitude of sins.rnrnThanks so much--again and again and again and again...you get the idea... --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 2:01:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is a great background piece, brilliantly written, perfectly ‘meaty’ and informative, yet left me wanting more! It breaks my heart to think of Rogue scared of Logan but I know all will be revealed and I hope, somewhere down the line, there’s a ‘happy-ever-after’. :-)

I’m thoroughly looking forward to Jean having her say and reading more about our little Rogue.

Fav line: “...because without her there was no him. She mattered, he didn't; it was as simple as that.” xx

Author's Response: Thanks for everything! (*nudge, nudge, wink, wink*) I hate that Rogue is afraid of Logan, too, but as you suspect, everything will come right in the end. And then it will be Jean's turn to be afraid...very afraid... --Wendie

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 12:34:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Jean is a creature of a whole different kind in this isn't she? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! And, yeah, she is a whole other animal in this one. I probably should have put the 'OOC' tag on this, too, but it's hard for me to see Jean as anything other than a bitch, so while this shows her bitchiness to the Nth degree, it ain't that much of a stretch. Personally, I blame it all on the terrible casting in the movie--NO chemistry between Famke and Hugh whatsoever--and the script didn't exactly portray her as the warmest soul on the planet either. I'm told that she's a much better person in the comics and I will read some of those, but not until I finish this story--wouldn't want to start liking Jean NOW...that would ruin everything! Hope to update this weekend. --Wendie

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 7:50:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really like this chapter. Yes, it has a different feel than the first chapter, but this one is more background so that's cool. I loved the mystery of the first chapter, and with this one you added to the picture you are painting but only faint background colors and undertones. I think it works great. I can't wait to find out what/how Jean made Rogue scared on Logan. There are only a couple of things I can think would make that happen so it will be interesting if you and I share the same ideas. I wonder, has Jean been cheating on Logan the entire time they were together? If Scott died a year ago and Jean had Logan a month and a half later and 3 months ago was the dirty doctor incident, then there are about 7 months where they were 'a couple', was she cheating on him the entire time? And if so will we find out more? The first chapter explained how she did it, but will we get confirmation as to when and how Logan figured it out?

Author's Response: Thank you for such an amazing review! You have truly restored my confidence in this chapter. As a matter of fact, yes, you will be getting answers to all of those questions in the coming chapters, many of them in the next chapter. And thanks for 'doing the math'; even I hadn't quite got around to calculating how many months they were actually a couple. Keep in mind that even when they were 'together' he would still leave the mansion for periods of time, a few weeks here, a month there, and also remember that he's a feral with a very, very sensitive and accurate sense of smell...oh, dear, did I write that out loud? See, your spectacular review almost had me spilling the proverbial beans...Chapter 3 should be up this weekend to fill in a few more of the solid colors in the picture. --Wendie

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 5:55:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter! I wonder what Jean did to Rogue. And if Logan is the only one seeing the dread Jean is.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried about this one because it felt different than the first one, but it seems to have worked out well. As for what Jean did to Rogue, next chapter will be very informative. And remember that Logan has an accomplice, so at least one other person sees her for what she is. Update should be posted this weekend. --Wendie

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 3:15:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

ooooooo yay

Author's Response: It's amazing how you can warm my heart using just three letters of the alphabet. Thanks! --Wendie

Reviewer: lunarkitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 2:30:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

More! :D :D :D

Your Logan-isms in this story make me laugh out loud. "Meaner than cat-shit," LMAO. You officially win the best Logan-isms ever award.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Coming from you, because I love the 'Logan voice' in all of your stories, I consider the best Logan-isms ever award a true honor. I have no idea where I first heard 'meaner than cat shit', but I've always thought it was rather descriptive, so it just seemed to fit. I'll be working on Ch. 3 this week with the goal of posting by the weekend. --Wendie

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 9:19:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

Man oh man. The way this is progressing reminds me of my favorite show Lost: it's addictive, has some serious WTF moments, and even though it teases you with some answers to long-lingering questions, at the end of it all you're still drooling to know more.

Are we not supposed to know what exactly Jean did to hurt Rogue yet and why?

And I've said it before, but I'll say it again: Jean seriously needs to be thrown off of the Blackbird...over a minefield...in a thunderstorm...

I hope you're plan for her "suffering" is as satisfying.

Author's Response: Man oh man, right back at ya! Lost? Really? Wow! Even though I've never seen the show, I know how popular (read: addictive) it is. I'm tickled positively pink that my story is in such good company! As for what exactly Jean did to hurt Rogue, next chapter should answer that question, assuming all goes according to plan with the writing and none of the characters give me any trouble. I like your ideas about a fitting fate for Jean and I promise the 'suffering' will be positively Biblical. --Wendie

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 9:01:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is good! I liked the inner musings, and the way in which Logan doesn't really know his own feelings, but as an outsider we can. I can't wait to see some Rogue/Logan interaction coming up. Nice work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I, too, look forward to scenes with Rogue and Logan. I need an antidote to the Logan/Jean smut! Next chapter will see them together, but not happily, I'm afraid. Not yet, anyway. But by the end, everyone will get what they want--except Jean, who will get what she deserves. Heh, heh. --Wendie

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 8:47:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

hey, i'm intrigued... not normally a jeannie-basher but i'd like to see where this goes... please?

Author's Response: I'm very happy to oblige, Hobbit! I know not everyone is a card-carrying member of the I Hate Jean Club, so I appreciate your interest in what's coming up. I'll be working on the next chapter starting tomorrow and it shouldn't take as long to get written as this one did. Thanks again! --Wendie

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 8:12:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

Just when I thought I couldn't hate jean more... you pull this on me. GGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Hate Her. And I'm as loving and forgiving as Mother Theresa, so that's saying something.

Author's Response: Holy Mother Teresa! I didn't know you could write off the page like that! Wow! I take your review as a high compliment, because the more I write, the more I'm convinced that the only good Jean is a morbidly hated Jean...and you really haven't seen her at her worst yet...Mwahahahaha! --Wendie

Reviewer: RoseSumner Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 8:53:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh dear lord! I liked this even more than your dialouge-fic! Good job! I was surprised to see Bobby with Jean-not many writers do that. And omfg, she's such a slut! There are support groups for that kind of skankiness. But it was well written, even if that Logan/Jean sex makes me gag. I can't wait to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you, you marvelous writer, you! I so know what you mean about the Logan/Jean smut. As I said in another response, my only comfort is knowing that it's JUST sex for sex sake, if you know what I mean. However, as I write Chapter 2, I'm finding out that Wolvie has a talent for compartmentalizing when it comes to his baser needs, so apparently, it doesn't trip his gag reflex like it does ours! But in terms of his heart, well, it turns out it's totally free of Jean's fingerprints and it always was. I know where the story is going and have a rough map of the road I intend to take to get there, but some of the scenery along the way is surprising even me, so I'm just as anxious as you are to see how it all turns out! Thank you again for this review *big, big hugs*. To be able to entertain and excite someone whose writing I admire as much as yours is a true blessing. --Wendie

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 12:53:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think this is a great story, I think it's interesting that Logan seems to truly hate Jean and deeply loves Rogue so that he'd put himself in the middle to protect her. I really like this and I'm dying to find out how this progresses!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that Logan's real feelings came through, especially with Rogue, because those weren't quite as clearly spelled out. Before we progress, we must digress a bit and look back at how he ended up in such a twisted position...Hoping to update later this week. --Wendie

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 9:57:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

heh heh Wolvie is sooo playing Jean. i hate that bitch and hope she gets her comeuppance soon.

and eeewwww, Bobby? totally fits tho, the woman has no taste whatsoever.

update soon please. :)

Author's Response: Well, she did lust after Wolvie first, so she has to have *some* taste--or at least, she did, once upon a time. And she will definitely get her comeuppance (love that word!)--not just from Wolvie, either. Turns out he's not just one in a queue in her bed, but he's also one of several folks with bones to pick with Dr. Megabitch (thanks for the nickname, mltaylor!) Thanks for letting me know you like this. Look for an update this week. --Wendie

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 10:29:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm never much for stories in which Jean sleeps around or when Logan's with Jean but loves Marie... however, you pulled this off somehow, and I'm curious to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! To know that I've gone right down the 'wrong alley' with you and you are still interested enough to keep reading makes me tingly all over. I so hope the rest of the story lives up to your expectations. --Wendie

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2010 6:08:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok I love that Logan is pining away for Marie. jean is a slut! But I can deal with her and Logan as long as he is only using her. Update soon.

Author's Response: Using. Definitely...Only...Wouldn't-even-contemplate-doing-otherwise...Doesn't-feel-a-thing...Using. Period. Believe me, it's the only way I can stomach writing Logan/Jean smut, let alone put anyone else through reading it. Eeeewww! Thanks for letting me know I haven't totally turned you off. --Wendie

Author's Response: Using. Definitely...Only...Wouldn't-even-contemplate-doing-otherwise...Doesn't-feel-a-thing...Using. Period. Believe me, it's the only way I can stomach writing Logan/Jean smut, let alone put anyone else through reading it. Eeeewww! Thanks for letting me know I haven't totally turned you off. LOL! --Wendie

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2010 4:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love these kinds of stories where Jean is the bad bad bad girl. I hope she gets what is coming to her.

Logan will do anything and everything to ensure Marie's safety. Don't you just love him. * sighs *

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know I've hit the nail on the head with regard to your kind of story. And, yeah, as big, tough, super hunky protectors go, they don't make 'em any better than Logan. I second your *sigh*, big time! And rest assured, Jean is going to get what's coming to her--and then some. --Wendie

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2010 1:31:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

ooohhhh....! I get it. This is good. xXx

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you think so. --Wendie

Reviewer: jackmansgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 9:29:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue this!!! I love it so far!

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you dig this. And I will definitely continue it, not only because you asked so nicely, but also because the muse and the bunny have ganged up on me and wouldn't let me NOT write it even if I wanted to quit--which, of course, I don't. --Wendie

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 6:31:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice. I really like the way this is shaping up, I'm just hoping for a happy ending. (crosses fingers and toes) ps. I can see Logan as a Willie Nelson fan easy!

Author's Response: Oh, yeah, Logan is the living, breathing definition of a redneck, musically speaking, that is, so I'm sure there's more than one Willie Nelson tune on his iPod! I'm so glad you like the story and I think a happy ending is definitely do-able. I'm pathologically incapable of writing any other kind--so far. --Wendie

Reviewer: ashmo21 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 3:48:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

holy crap!!!! You wrote this beautifully and now i can't wait to read the rest....

Author's Response: Holy gratitude! Thanks a bunch! I hope to update at least once a week, but try not to hate me too much if I slip a little on that timetable...some parts of this will be tougher to write than others, but I'll do my best. --Wendie

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 11:55:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love to hate Jean. And I always look forward to your stories. So now tell us how Logan is saving Rogue by screwing the skanky slut(Jean issues).

Author's Response: Obviously, I share your Jean issues, as do lots of other people on this site, judging by all the times she's been called a bitch in various reviews. Part of the fun of this story is finally just calling her that straight out--no allusions, nothing implied--just 'she's a bitch. Period.' As for how Logan is protecting Rogue by keeping the 'skanky slut' happy...I'm thinking that should be clear by Chapter 3, if not sooner, depending on how good you are at deciphering the clues in this chapter and the next...--Wendie

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