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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 4:30:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

omfg, that was sooooo beautiful and sweet and soft and aaaaggghhhhhhhh!

sorry, no other words will suit it. just so lovely that i am jealous i'm not Marie!

Author's Response: >hugs very very very tightly< I think everyone on this sight.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 4:13:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

YEAH! he should definitely come back and kill the Professor. that man struck a deal with the devil and sooner or later he has to pay. he just didn't expect the devil to be Wolverine.


grrrr! love it!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 4:06:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

oops, just when he's not looking his most precious thing vanishes! pay more attention to the screwed up delicate woman logan!

love this story!

Author's Response: Lmao!! Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 10:48:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

yeah....it does.....but i do hope i see another one by u that was this awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you think so.

Reviewer: seargentlambchop Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 9:26:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great story! Too bad you couldn't add more, but it still had an excellent ending. Hope you continue writing more stories. I'm really looking forward too it.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. (btw: your username is fairly awesome)....I'm actually half-way through the first chapter of something else now. ;~)

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 11:40:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

This was amazing! It was so sweet an poignant. So kind. A story I'll read again.

Author's Response: Uberninja thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. >hugs<

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 6:39:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

Perfect. That word summarises my feelings about this entire story. I have thoroughly enjoyed every update and I almost feel a sense of loss that it’s finished! This chapter was so carefully written, so gentle, so brilliantly unhurried (or at least that’s how it came across to me).

“There was a deep pleasure in a corporeal fire--in it's scent, in the heat that stretched across the floorboards, in the primitive knowledge that he was keeping his girl warm.” - I just loved this line, I can’t even fully explain why, it just says so much, it’s so ‘cosy’.

“Something he could bring out in his mind when he felt like torturing himself.” – such an interesting line, very Logan, if you see what I mean.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this website. You are a very talented writer. x

Author's Response: You are by far one of the coolest reviewers in the world. I always look forward to your's. Thank you. >presents cup of hot chocolate, with marshmallows< ....btw: as everyone on this site knows, 'cozy' is the best adjective in the world. I'm so happy I could make you say it.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 5:50:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

Beautifully done x [sits back sighs loudly with satisfaction and applauds] again I must mention the way in which you’ve written it, love the short and sharp intermixed with the longer sentencing. Each small step flowed with gentleness and ease to cover the stretches of time in this chappie. His protectiveness and patience, some shown for her to see, some hidden, just there. His inbuilt natural understanding of an incomparable situation, knowing how far/how fast/when to stop/what to do etc. letting her find herself at her own pace.

“And something else he'd never said before and would repeat to no one else.” You could have just made him say it, glad you didn’t, I love the way this simple statement hits it home with so much more depth. [Up there on my list of all time fav finishes]

five stars for fic itself and for keeping your promise with regard to updating to entice me into chapter reading :) can’t promise to do it again but will promise to read anything and everything you post from here on in even if I wait till completed!

well done x

Author's Response: >dances< Thank you for this review. Super mambo poodle thanks, and a donut with caramel frosting. I'm glad I could make a non-chapter-reader read chapters. That is fairly pimpalicious. ;~)

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 5:10:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

The emotion.. such emotion that this story really brought me to... It's indescribable. It truly is. It was perfect. The step by step course of her gaining back her woman-hood. His patience. And her first positive sexually gratifying experience when she was ready... Took my breath away. Not because I wish that I could have experienced it, but because it was a step that was much bigger than what it would be to people who didn't know what she had gone through. Perfect ending, and yet, I crave for more. I guess we always don't get what we want in life right?

Author's Response: Oh, mess. Super mambo thanks and a german shephard for you. I'm so glad I could make you feel that way. Gracias. >dances<

Reviewer: Geeves Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 1:03:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so sad its over. I'm glad they finally did it! Wow. Good to scratch that itch AND WELL WORTH IT! Such a good story. And I repeat, such a good story.

Epiloge?

Author's Response: Me too. I'll really miss writing this-even the parts where writers block attacked me. And, of course, the awesome reviews. Thank you. ....No epilouge though; sorry. :~)

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 12:06:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well......it was interesting. Still kinda think its weird.....it would help if i knew how old she was otherwise i find it a bit creepy. other than that this story was Awesome!

Author's Response: Well, a year later+the time they spent on the road+the time they spent at the mansion. You can safely assume Marie is seventeen/eighteen. Does that help?

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 11:06:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 9:32:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

I can't believe this was the final chapter! It was a beautiful chapter, and I adored the slow progression and the almost loving way in which it seemed to be written. However, I am so desperate for more, because I'm greedy like that. So I'm just saying, I wouldn't feel like an epilogue or something was unnecessary... :P Thanks for the great story, though!

Author's Response: I'm so grateful for your greediness. :~) I wish I could give you a sequel, but the story's over. I dont mean that in a rude way, its just...I can't see anything more. When its over, you know....Does that sound stupid? >hugs<

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 8:37:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love this chapter; you have a great talent for slow development. It works very well. I am kind of wondering what happened in the 6 months between when he rescued her and when this chapter starts but I don't know that it is hugely important, but the time gap makes me curious.

Author's Response: Thank you. >hugs< I'm not to fond of time gaps myself, using "One year later" and other variations. But nothing....vital (is that the word I wanna use?)happened inside those six months that readers couldnt assume. Logan and Marie were on the run for awhile. He fought for enough money to buy the pickup, and they lived out of that and cheap motels. ;~)

Reviewer: Freespirit Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 8:31:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

Aaaawwwww....! Great, great job!! I love the way you built up the physical stage between Logan and Marie, the you thought about everything in such a clever manner!!
I also loved that you didn't make Logan avenge "his girl", that you made that he'd concentrate on her and her only, letting others do the dirty job.

I really fell for your story, and the universe you created. Thank you for these much pleasurable hours of pure Rogan!!

Author's Response: In real life, I'd buy you an ice cream sundae and a puppy if you said that to me. Thank you. >hugs tightly<

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 6:31:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

this is interesting

Author's Response: Thanks. :~)

Reviewer: VIIIMMV Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 6:22:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it. Loved the way your worked up to the end. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you. Thats all for this story though.

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 5:25:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

i love the slow build up. you've done a wonderful wonderful story. boooo for it being over. :) can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Muchas gracias and a donut with strawberry frosting and sprinkles.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 5:17:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great work. As with the chapters where Logan was bringing Marie out of all the horrible things she'd been through, this had a wonderful pace to it and a sense of time easily passing. I found it only natural that their relationship progress to one of a sexual nature and thought everything terribly sweet. Thank you so much for sharing this story. It was a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Holy Rogan, Batman. However much you enjoyed this fic, I promise I felt the same way about this review. Thank you.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 5:04:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Such a sweet ending. Sob sob sob. Siiiigh... He is so gentle with her, so patient. I want my own Logan. Eh...And what is happening to Xavier is poetic justice. He made a pact with Devil. Did he really expected him (or them) to be honest?

Author's Response: I think we all want our own Logan. >wistful sigh< Lol. Thank you very much. :~) :~)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 4:24:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

As much as he wanted her, it was never about sex, not really. It was about giving her back her womanhood, making her whole again--not letting what They did to her define her, or deprive her, forever. This was positively amazing, so sensitive, so honest--bringing the healing full circle. I love that we know what he said to her without you having to actually write the words, because everything he did, including buying those precious books, screamed how he felt loud and clear. Talk about more 'show' than 'tell'. Wow.

I'm also glad he put her well-being above his need to kill Xavier and let the universe mete out its own justice.

A few things really hit me:

"You wanna show me?" the woman purred.

"No." Logan said, stepping politely around her. Perhaps Marie and he would stop at Sonic on the way home. She liked their root beer floats.
His transformation is complete. Pure brilliance.

She stared at those texts as if trying to seize something too far away from her. A child who'd accidentally let go of a balloon and was desperately trying to grasp the string that's already blown out of reach. I am simply in awe. No shit. Awe.

The descriptions of his 'discomfort'--the profound sacrifice that he never once thought was too great because it was for her. Amazing.

If I wasn't already in love with the feral brute, this story would have surely sealed the deal. And, at the risk of setting myself up for yet another addiction--What else ya got?

Or does that sound as though I'm just a greedy, ungrateful witch who only loves you for your outrageous writing talent and has no thought or care for your need to 'come down' after an intense experience such as this?

Oh, well, something tells me Stephen King's publisher didn't say, "Take a vacation. Get back to us whenever you can" after 'Carrie'(his first novel) hit the best seller list. And yes, in my opinion, you do belong in THAT kind of company... --Wendie

Author's Response: Ohmygodohmygodohmygod....I've been chanting that outloud at my computer for the past five minutes. Just...holy shit. Ohmygod. I don't even know how to thank you. I just can't think of anything. >hugs< ....I can't believe what you said about Stephen King. He's my favorite author; I've got almost every book he's ever written on my bookshelves. Thats....unbelievable to hear you say. Believe it or not, I actually made the outline for my next story Thursday. I'll start on it tomorrow.

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 4:21:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow. Once again I don't have words that match how well you've written this. I don't think this could've ended any better - it truly fit & was perfect. Perfectly sweet, perfectly tender, perfectly complete. If I tried to list all of my favorite parts from this I'd end up just pasting the entire chapter, but I have to say the hot chocolate for dinner part is at the top of the list. Better than the kittens.

I really enjoyed this entire story and I absolutely cannot wait for whatever you come up with next (after a well deserved break of course. *throws confetti for you*). It doesn't seem like it was easy to write, but thank you for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: Oh jesus. Thank you!!!!.....And I did mention kittens, actually. Just for you. ;~) >hugs< I've got my next fic lined up; I'll probably start on it tomorrow.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 4:13:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

This was such a great story. I hope to see more from you in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!! >screams happily<

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2010 12:37:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

There’s a line at the beginning saying ‘it wouldn’t be difficult’ referring to what Logan wanted to do to the Prof. to back that up you follow with ‘ Chuck flinched, and the touch on Logan's brain evaporated.’ Then we had – ‘Logan was no match against The Professor's telepathy. Had Chuck so desired, The Wolverine could be laying in a coma, unable to wipe himself let alone deliver threats.’

Now as you stated after, it may have been the prof’s ‘guilt?’ that let Logan through. But I can’t see the prof letting Logan in full Wolverine mode getting that close if he could be stopped – way too dangerous - self preservation and fuck the consequences being the prof’s theme, guilty at being found out or not.

‘He was certain he'd come back someday (perhaps sooner, rather than later) for the old man.’ Which leaves me with the question – Is he a match for the Prof or not? And if he is, why did he let him off so easily? can't see him just walking away even if he was the underdog.

I read this chapter when 1st posted but have just re-read because I came away the first time thinking it was a little too easy (both the confrontation with the prof and the rescue but especially the confrontation) the second time though left me feeling the same – I can’t believe I’m saying this as someone who’s so impatient for updates but maybe with a little more time this could have been 2 chapters?

Please don’t take my ramblings as criticism – it’s just that you’ve got me so into the fic and I’m loving it! looking forward to the last one.

Author's Response: In the first quote, (Wolverine) meant physically easy, as if with a nonmutant. I believe they both were over-stressed, torn apart: Xavier by secrecy/guilt, Logan by panic. Emotions neither of these characters are really used to dealing with. I meant this chapter to emphasize the duality to the characters...With our Wolvie: on the one hand, you have his more rational, human side-Logan, who is fully aware of The Professor's abilities, that his chief priority lays with finding Marie and that any act of revenge against Xavier would need to be well-planned. On the other hand you have The Wolverine, who can only comprehend an enemy being stronger than him if it is a physical strength that he can see....I fully understand how you could have gotten confused, and I am so, so sorry that I wasn't more clear. This chapter did come out shorter than I intended, for two reasons: I was trying to give it a sense of being fast-paced, rather than just too fast.(It looked much longer on paper-fourteen pages, but I forgot to factor in dialogue and my huge handwriting). And this is my first real attempt at an a chapter with these elements; I'm not entirely comfortable writing action. I'm not trying to make excuses, of course, and I can't begin to tell you how much I apologize for the way it came out...Does all that make sense? Please feel free to email me if it does or does not, or with any other questions/issues and thank you for being so thorough in your review. I'm glad you like the story enough to tell me. :-)

Author's Response: In the first quote, (Wolverine) meant physically easy, as if with a nonmutant. I believe they both were over-stressed, torn apart: Xavier by secrecy/guilt, Logan by panic. Emotions neither of these characters are really used to dealing with. I meant this chapter to emphasize the duality to the characters...With our Wolvie: on the one hand, you have his more rational, human side-Logan, who is fully aware of The Professor's abilities, that his chief priority lays with finding Marie and that any act of revenge against Xavier would need to be well-planned. On the other hand you have The Wolverine, who can only comprehend an enemy being stronger than him if it is a physical strength that he can see....I fully understand how you could have gotten confused, and I am so, so sorry that I wasn't more clear. This chapter did come out shorter than I intended, for two reasons: I was trying to give it a sense of being fast-paced, rather than just too fast.(It looked much longer on paper-fourteen pages, but I forgot to factor in dialogue and my huge handwriting). And this is my first real attempt at an a chapter with these elements; I'm not entirely comfortable writing action. I'm not trying to make excuses, of course, and I can't begin to tell you how much I apologize for the way it came out...Does all that make sense? Please feel free to email me if it does or does not, or with any other questions/issues and thank you for being so thorough in your review. I'm glad you like the story enough to tell me. :-)

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 5:05:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Never ever EVER. Take what another man claims as his own. Especially Logan's. He always gets it back. Great chapter :D

Author's Response: Yep. Thats the first lesson in Wolverinology. Thanks a bunch, so glad you liked it!

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