I like this, but I don't remember an 'Alex Summers' in X1. I have seen one in X-Men: Evolution, which is a perfectly legitimate category to use.

You do a good job of making the characters likable and keeping the story moving. I like your choice of Alex--he's a fresh face and if you're going where I think you are with this, the interaction between him and Scott, let alone him and Logan, will provide some great scenes. I'll be following... --Wendie

Author's Response: I'm glad your liking this. I've adjusted the summary, the story takes place after X1, but then streams off into I guess an AU, it will all make sense in the end, I hope. it's all planned out we'll hear from Wolverine soon. and things will start to tie in to each other.