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[Report This]Date: 04/27/2010 11:12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sometimes... I see better with my eyes closed.
love this story. Im pretty much reading off my phone right now, so sorry about the grammer. Anyway, this is great. I love the flash back in the first chapter when she is trying to mentally escape her captors. And alex is a great character to use. Hes always been a fav of mine and i wish he were in more story lines. Cant wait till there is more logan interaction in the next story. Love the depth of the characters and the challenge of memory loss promotes so many possibility threads. Keep writing!
Author's Response: no worries, I'm always typing faster than my brain can process. Glad your enjoying the fic. next chapter in the next series already up. Hope you enjoy the loops I'm about to throw into the mix. Memoery loss is my favorite to write with!!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2010 7:02:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sometimes... I see better with my eyes closed.
well not sure where this is going.... i think it needs a bit more explaining
Date: 03/13/2010 12:20:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sometimes... I see better with my eyes closed.
First of all, I agree with Tamisnead, you can't leave this as a one-shot. You have created too much interest in characters and situations that are 'unfinished' to let it stand as is. And you also need to correct the spelling of the title. I look forward to more. --Wendie
Author's Response: thank you so much I was in a bit of a rush, thanks, and I think I might be working on the next chapter.
Date: 03/13/2010 11:34:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sometimes... I see better with my eyes closed.
Please, please don't leave this as a one-shot. You must tell us what's already happened, going to happen, and above all give us a happy ending with lots of smut!