Yeah, a little morbid, but we all get that impulse now and again. Yours, it turns out, is very well written and an interesting counterpoint to 'Obys'. I love how she tells him to 'Stop Logan. Sit down and put the keys back in your pocket.' She knows him so well.

Saddest line: 'Can you...can you tell my mum that I'm gone? And...don't bury me with gloves on.'

I'm sure he would have moved heaven and earth to give her that kiss... --Wendie