You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 5:58:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting - more please.

Author's Response: ok, seeing as you asked nicely :) - hopefully chapter 2 up later tonight (but I'm going out - so depending on what time I get in! - us oldies can't handle the pace as well as we used to!)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 11:22:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love new original characters. getting off to a good start, Jake's voice is very clear and interesting.

Author's Response: I haven't tried it before - it seems so hard to make them work, I never seem to give any middle ground when reading myself I either love em or hate em! glad to hear i'm doing ok so far!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 7:52:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the new concept. A 90 year old Jubes makes me laugh. Now the question is... who's dead?

Author's Response: I work with the elderly and they can be so much more fun than people think. Thanks for reviewing x I seem to be skipping your question, didn't read it therefore can't answer it!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 4:51:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, goody, goody, a multi-chapter fic from you! Love how this starts. Give me a too-smart-for-his-own-good wise crackin' smart ass any day of the week. If Jake ain't a whole lot like Logan must have been as a teenager, I'll eat my computer. Oh, this is going to be such fun... --Wendie

Author's Response: someone (mentioning no names) could have seen the outlined whole thing had my e-mail to her not obviously got lost in cyberspace! now you'll just have to wait for the fun! oh god there's supposed to be fun? ;)

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 3:51:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this ought to be interesting.

Author's Response: It's a bit different from the norm but I'll endeavor keep your interest:)

You must login (register) to review.