I love that Marie reacquaints him with his humanity; she's always been his best link to it.

Their lovemaking--especially the last paragraph ('That's what Ah was trying to say')--was pure poetry. What he said--'fucking beautiful'.

Congratulations on finishing this masterwork. If anyone ever endeavored to collect 'the best fan fiction ever written', that volume would be incomplete if it did not include this amazing story. --Wendie