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Date: 03/21/2010 9:07:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
First, my apologies for not keeping up with this story--pfft! 'story'--ha! That word doesn't even come anywhere near to accurately describing what I just read. 'EXPERIENCE' comes a lot closer--as you were posting it. Somehow I knew that I would need a large block of very quiet time to focus on this so that I could truly appreciate it and in the hours between 4 and 8 a.m. this morning I finally found it.
As I read this, as captured as I was by the story, I couldn't help being awed by the depth and detail of your imagination. I *felt* every inch of this, could almost smell the musty, dank underground chambers, hear the explosions. The description of Maripoor was beyond heart-wrenching and without a doubt one of the best (or worst?) reasons anyone ever dreamed up for Logan needing to forget his past. You have given them all so many layers, not just Logan and Marie, but also Kurt, Hank, Storm and Kitty--and Remy, who it turns out really does have a heart after all. I'm glad.
Nice touch throwing in Merlott's from 'True Blood'. There are other moments that stick out from the later chapters--the biggest laugh out loud was Kurt calling Logan 'schnuptzikinz' or whatever the hell that was when they were bamf-ing off the jet--priceless!--but they are too numerous to list here. As time permits, I may go back and comment on each chapter, but for now I am exhausted--or X-hausted, if you know what I mean. It's been one helluva mission...and I could use some breakfast.
I anxiously await the finale. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2010 3:50:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Please. DOn't you ever leave Logan and Marie alone. They'd be all sad and dull and unbearably boring without you. They'd do horrible things like settling down and becoming proffessors and vegetarians and raising sheep or something equally unsuitable. You hafta hafta hafta always keep playing with them in public for us. Pretty pretty please?
I love the way you scare the crap out of me. Your writing makes me feel.
~Mia
Author's Response: hey, thanks for all your kind reviews. this is probably the darkest thing i've ever written and it's not everyone's cup of tea which makes getting feedback like yours so gratifying. it's nice to see not everyone's put off by it. glad you're enjoying it and i'll try to get it finished asap... thanks again for the reviews and hobbits away, ho!
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2010 3:35:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
At first I was like: WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF TWISTED SHIT DOES ESSEX DO??? And then I realized it was Mr. Sinister, therefore I should expect it from him. I really enjoyed the last several chapters. It clarified a lot.
Author's Response: twisted, essex is always twisted... glad you're enjoyign it though and that stuff is clarified. there's still one or two things left to sort out but i will set about doing that asap. thanks again for the review andrnhobbits away, ho!
Date: 03/02/2010 12:37:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
This is really good, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: cheers! glad you're enjoying it :-)
Date: 03/01/2010 9:49:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
Twists, turns, back stories, conflicted "villains" and compromised heroes--- this story has it all! I'm really looking forward to how it will all turn out in the end. And I'm really enjoying Kurt's character in these last coupla chapters. Thanks!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review. and i'm glad you're enjoying kurt... fear i may be developing a tiny bit of a crush on him... am sure storm would kick my ass for even going there... although maybe him and logan could wrestle for me- ahem gotta go... glad you're enjoying it anyway..:-)rnhobbits away, hey!