wow! just wow!

this was a very powerful chapter, i am totally entranced by this story now.

i have to go back to the original Donella story you posted a few weeks ago. i remember laughing sort of at the end when she got together with Xaiver, it caught me so off guard. but now i have to go back and read it with new eyes now that i see what a powerful connection they have forged together. should give me new insight into this really unique and wonderful OC you have created!

Author's Response: I try to make my OC's as real as the established characters. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much.