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what the hell is wrong with him? why can't he figure out who she is or what they're doing?
and why the hell would she sleep with him when he's blubbering over stupid jean?
god, i love a story that gets me so riled up and pissy lol
The drama in this story is better then any soap opera I've ever seen!! Good Job! Can't wait to read more!
I thought this was very well done, including the smut. Logan is all screwed up, obviously, and his level of screwed up is not something that resolves itself magically in one or two chapters. I like that you're having Marie be the grownup in this situation.
On a different note, if you do not have a beta reader, I would be happy to serve in that role. Please feel free to contact me.
I've got a feeling there could be more going on with your Logan than just grief because he kept saying sorry to her. But hey I've been wrong before wow! Was I hanging out for you to update.
Author's Response: This time you're right! There's more going on with Logan then we think. Have you considered that he wasn't apologizing to her but maybe to something/someone else? Remember the mission he went on...
You did OK with the smut, but you're quickly on your way to losing me as a reader. Logan has been a total jerk, a real ass at times, but never has he been this dishonorable or weak or confused, particularly with regard to his sex life. And for Rogue, after all she's been through up to now, to let him fuck her--again!--while in some stupor where he calls her 'Jeannie'--what's up with that? I thought she was past all that. Please wake these two up and let them smell the effin' coffee! -- Wendie
Author's Response: I regret that I'm not able to hold your attention. However, this is simply the way that Logan is in this story. We all see Logan in different ways and for the sake of this story, he has to be this way. He is confused and messed up in many ways. Also, in my opinion Logan's sexlife is something we interpreter from various stories we read (remember, this is movieverse) and in this story, sex is not just sex for him but also about comfort and the feeling to belong somewhere. Mainly, with Rogue. Rogue is not weak to me but dealing with things differently from Logan. She uses the sex with him as a way to reconnect with him. Some things will be explained in the next chapter, like his murmering and what happened at the mission. Hopefully, that will clear this up! Sophie
and now if that wasnt confusing.... y didnt logan recognize that it was marie?
Author's Response: He did. And yet he didn't. I know, confusing. Next chapter will clear things up. Hopefully...
Very nice smut.
Only I hate the fact that Jean is still haunting them... especially Logan. He needs to move on. And it breaks my heart that Marie is being used and isn't taking action to stop it.
Author's Response: Damn Jean to the deepest pitts of hell. If she isn't there already ;) Things are confusing between Logan and Marie but wait for the next chapter!
Logan is an lowest of animals. I don't think Sabortooth/Victor Creed wouldn't stoop this low. What is wrong with Marie for letting his do this to her????
I love it!
Dude, that was harsh. Like seriously I want to stab Logan's eyes so because he was so preoccupied with Jean's memories that he didn't even recognized Marie and the he fucking left!
OMG I really want to kick his 'nads. Seriously.
Marie shouldn't be treated like that.
And I like the touch of the Prof's study.
ok, i thought i had it figured out, but now i'm not sure.
can't wait to see whats going on w/logan
Love you for using the Snow Patrol lyrics (They're my ultimate, most favorite band on the face of this Earth). Hate that Logan did the whole Jean thing again. Can I throttle him, please?
Author's Response: Maybe later. Killing him now would kinda ruin the story, don't cha think? "Run" is one of my favorite songs, wether it's by Leona Lewis or Snow Patrol.
What a fucker! Oooh I'm so mad at him I could spit!