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Date: 04/04/2010 12:37:40 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
This is crazy good. I was tearing up in some places, especially when he was lying on top of her saying, "Marie...Marie..."
The shower scene was brilliant, so powerful and fun at the same time.
Sometimes your action and description seems a little hurried, but it works out well enough. I can't wait for an update.
Date: 03/24/2010 6:56:04 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
I just love your story, I think you really stayed thrue to the characters and I can't Wait to see wath happens next. I actually check everyday if you have uptated your story. Don't stop!
Date: 03/23/2010 2:02:10 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
The story you're asking about in killerkittens review is "Nine Months" by Joanne. That particular scene is in chapter 4 I think.
Author's Response: Thanks. I got these little pieces of stories I've read in my head and then I can't remember what story they're from. I blame the hormones. That always seems to work ;) Sophie
Date: 03/09/2010 6:46:38 AM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Even DEAD she's screwing things up!!! Damn that woman! Logan needs to seriously get his head out of his ass before he damages what little relationship he has left with Marie. Please tell us you're going to make him suffer?!?!? He SOOOO deserves to!!
Date: 03/07/2010 1:46:28 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
I Love this fic!! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2010 5:23:02 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE STORY.
I wander where this logan is going?
He seems to be not only a Logan without any honor, but also a liar as well.
Can't wait to read more!!!!!!
Date: 02/23/2010 10:34:51 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
I really loved the part where Rogue attacks him with the shower and scream. I could really see her doing so. I really love your fic, it's one of my favorite on this web site. Seriously, you have done a really good job so keep going.
Date: 02/22/2010 9:06:21 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
OMG loved it! specially the end
Date: 02/21/2010 5:56:56 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
I beg of you, more. More, more, more please!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2010 6:49:33 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
it looks like he's finally getting his head out of his ass in ch 3, i hope to god he hurries up because i'm getting more and more angry at him
arrrg he's being such a big fat jerk. perfect angst.
Date: 02/18/2010 7:33:36 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
OOHHHHHHHH!!!! That F'N BASTARD!!
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2010 6:35:31 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
This is such a unique story. I really like how it's going. I dunno if Logan will ever feel sorry for using her as he has. And I wonder if she is going to stick up for herself.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2010 2:12:13 AM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
i hope at least, i hope many chapters plz and ty
Date: 02/17/2010 11:55:52 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
I can has more please? :D
Love it!
Date: 02/17/2010 9:52:16 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
OMG that was so so sad, please do continue I really want to see where you go with this. the angst was wonderfully captured!!
Date: 02/17/2010 9:03:53 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Please please please continue & redeem Logan in my eyes! We know Rogue is strong & I kind of want to see Logan get his head out of his ass in this story ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2010 8:33:26 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
yeh, i totally hate this Logan and this Jean. for god's sake her husband just died and she jumped right on Wolverine grrr.
and he is such an insensitive user bastard...which makes for a great story. maybe he'll redeem himself later...but that'll be hard b/c it is AWFUL how he's treated Rogue!
sometimes i do wonder why she loves him *sigh*
Author's Response: I know. Jean is such a whore but hey, what else is new?rnLogan really is an ass in this story, nobody will deny that! But it will change, eventually.
Date: 02/17/2010 6:56:15 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Oh, I hope you continue. This would be a great prologue-y type chapter before going deeper into Rogue and Logan's relationship.
Date: 02/17/2010 6:55:25 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Please continue this. But please give Rogue a little self-respect. She is so strong and I would love to see her raise the baby without Logan. No child should have to question their worth. And this Logan doesn't seem to be able to do that.
Date: 02/17/2010 5:11:55 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Ouch! Her suffering in silence is hard to take, but somehow it works, because I think her Southern pride would never allow her to be a drama-queen. Logan's obliviousness just pisses me off. I want to know what happens next, and how each of them reacts to becoming a parent.
I see what you mean about not having a beta, there's a couple of mistakes that a spell-checker is too stupid to catch. I would be happy to help you, if you like... biohelixx@yahoo.ca
More soon please!
Melanie
Author's Response: Thank you for being my third reviewer!rnI'm currently working out some ideas for the next chapter so I'll probably continue this story. I had a day off because I had to see the doctor so I was free to work on this. When I have time, I'll continue this!rnI'm never seen Rogue as the kind of girl that would just trail after Logan with lovesick eyes and everything so suffering in silence is very appropriate in this case.rnAfter rereading this story, I started not to like this Logan as well but my bunny is currently holding my laptop hostage so I can't change it... Thank God for cellphones!rnThanks again for the beta!rnrnSophie
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2010 5:10:14 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
Yes! Please continue this story! I can't believe that he is so heartless to Marie. Is he ignoring her feelings or just ignorent of them? Please continue this story. You have the makings of something really great here.
Author's Response: Thank you for being my second reviewer! I really love you guys!rnI kinda got an idea for a second chapter but we'll see how it works out.rnI'm not quite sure what Logan is doing... My bunny held me at gunpoint and demanded I wrote Logan this way... What can I do?rnIf he is ignoring her feelings or just ignorent to them, I honestly don't know. I'll try to see what I can do!rnrnSophie
Date: 02/17/2010 5:09:50 PM Title: Heartbreak Warfare
First, let me say that you do a great job of telling the story; I just am not sure I entirely love the story you're telling. You could stop this here--but personally I'd like to see you give Logan a chance to get his head out of his ass and do the right thing for a change. You might consider giving Rogue a spine and a pinch of self-respect while you're at it. I get that she loves the big jerk, but c'mon... --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you for being my first reviewer!rnI don't know how I got this story. This bunny just attacked me when I was in the shower and wouldn't let go. I'v been reading way too much angst lately (damn cravings!)rnI know what you mean about Rogue. In my opinion, she's this badass kicking superhero who doesn't give a shit but this Rogue is somewhat based on the Rogue from "A Change To Color". If you haven't read that one, I suggest you do. It's an amazing story and somehow it inspired me to write Rogue this way.rnI'm not quite sure what Logan's problem is, I simply don't know. I'll try to see if I can find a way to explain his behaviour but I don't even know myself how this story will turn out so we'll see!rnThank you for your advice!rnSophie