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Date: 02/19/2010 3:56:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, you are so right! I forgot about the 'outflow' part, but then all those questions became moot for me about three decades ago when my cherry went bye-bye. Although, to be honest, I probably didn't give it a whole lot of thought back then either. As my MOTHER, of all people, once told me, "It wasn't that I was so good back then (meaning the years after high school and before Dad); I was just lucky." Thanks for setting me straight. --Wendie
Date: 02/19/2010 11:31:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice job on the smut, but you might want to change 'nibbles' to 'nipples' and 'jar' to 'jaw'. Other than that, it was outstanding. As for how she got pregnant, my thought was pretty much exactly what you wrote. They got as far as him being inside her enough to have sperm from the pre-cum find its way to where it needed to go, but didn't actually 'go all the way', so to speak. The only hitch in that theory is that you don't say whether or not he actually broke her membrane. If he didn't, it would have been near to impossible for his little swimmers to get to the egg. But then again, we are talking about Logan here and he's nothing if not virile and potent. Wouldn't surprise me if his 'little swimmers' were Olympic gold medalists. Anyway, regardless of how it happened, now I'm looking forward to how Logan and Marie go about parenting their precious surprise. Does she have a name yet? If you're taking suggestions, I'd like to offer 'Belle', because it means 'beautiful' and because Marie is sometimes referred to as 'the Southern Belle'. I am so anxious for your updates. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks, already corrected the two mistakes. I already wondered while writing, if 'jar' was right, but I had just read another story and there it was spelt in that context 'jar', so I wondered, but didn't look it up. Next time I will...rnSorry to contradict your opinion, but it IS possible to get pregnant with an intact hymen. The membrane doesn't block the whole way, otherwise the blood during the period would be hold back by the hymen and wouldn't flow out... Anyway, I also looked that scenario up on some medical/pregnancy sites, and a few girls wrote they got knocked up without popped cherry. One even through sperm on the finger of her boyfriend, when he fingered her... so no Olympic gold medals for Logan XDrnBelle is nice, but I already decided on another name. But I now contemplate to make Belle her middle name...
Date: 02/19/2010 11:27:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow. That was amazing. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2010 10:55:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
well i thought it was smuttastic. xXx
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2010 8:11:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
lay it on me! ready for the flashback sexiness!
Date: 02/16/2010 7:42:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Woa, love your story this far!
Update soooooon!!!!!!!
Date: 02/16/2010 4:38:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Whoa... he's letting the Prof dig around, now THAT'S a sign that the fecal material is gonna get pretty damn deep! Keep with the updates, desy... cant' wait!
Date: 02/16/2010 4:29:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh. My. Gods. More please?
Date: 02/16/2010 1:20:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very clever--using the question of did they or didn't they to get us to the smut. I have a pretty good idea of what must have happened, but maybe I'm being too conventional. I look forward to getting a peek into Logan's head. You are also doing a great job of capturing Marie's jumble of emotions. Very well done. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks for your great feedback to every chapter (also my other story). I'm always glad to hear from you. I have the smut-chapter already typed and it will be up tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. I'm curious now, what's your 'pretty good idea' how Marie ended up pregnant?rnrn
Date: 02/12/2010 9:02:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Brutal,honest and amazing good work
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2010 9:12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh my god, what a nightmare for Rogue! and good lord is Wolverine going to be in deep trouble at the mansion!
Date: 02/11/2010 12:53:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far. Please continue.
Date: 02/11/2010 10:27:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oookkk. That was very unexpected. I liked it though. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 02/11/2010 8:09:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to read about Marie being in that much denial, but I suppose it's something lots of girls feel in that situation, especially since she didn't think she and Logan had actually had sex. Doesn't surprise me that he's 'Mr. Potent' either. I'm glad Logan is ready to take care of them both, but I hope she comes around sooner rather than later. Looking forward to more. --Wendie