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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2010 12:09:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

Lovely chapter...funny, serious, revealing...nicely done!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 5:14:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

Marie had to bite down her own giggles, when Logan – still chewing and sucking on his cigar – turned his head towards Becca and gazed down on their daughter – sucking peacefully on her silencer. His face froze for a moment before he slowly removed his beloved cigar from his mouth and his dark glare centered on his mate. "ROGUE!"


Oh, My, God!!!! I almost died laughing!!!!!!! That was hysterical. With out a doubt the best mental image in this story for me!!!! Love the Logan silencer and how he realized it was his 'pacifier' great chapter. Still hate Jean though.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 2:14:45 PM Title: Chapter 30

Never thought I'd see a practically fluffy Wolverine:)Very cute chapter!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 12:36:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

"Milkshake day" -- HAHAHAHAHAHA! And the Logan 'silencer' -- just as funny, especially when he realized what she had done. Here in America we call them 'pacifiers', but the result is the same either way.

Another excellent chapter. As much as I know Logan hopes he never has to face the heart-breaking choice of saving either his daughter or his mate (do I detect a bit of foreshadowing there?), I think he's got his priorities straight in thinking he would save Becca first. In fact, as a mother, that's what Rogue would want him to do, too. And if their positions were reversed, I think she would come to the same conclusion. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks for your review and rating! I already fixed that pacifier/silencer-thingy. And concerning your musings about Logan having to decide between his two girls - I don't say anything; just let yourself surprise ;-)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 10:52:46 AM Title: Chapter 30

I really like this chapter, I like how you addressed some of Marie's outbursts (those never did seem right to me), I like the way you handled the rumor topic, the red panties was really cute. Overall a really nice chapter.

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