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Date: 07/18/2014 12:40:27 AM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
This was beautiful; their first tme was the perfect blend of sexy, tender, and sweet.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2010 10:18:29 PM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
wow, you do a great job with this chapter.
i looooove the half formed phrases and short staccato sentences that mimic the rush of thoughts in Logan's mind, it does a lovely job mirroring the gasping, the shivers, the scattered thought and motion he would have making love for the first time to the only woman he's loved.
awesome!
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2010 12:30:12 AM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
...-is speechless- you first sex scene and you get that? -drools- can I have some of your talent? This was amazing!
Author's Response: Omg. A week after reading this, and I'm still smiling. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2010 3:23:22 AM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
It was good, really good. nice to show how gentle logan can be with her. keep it up i want update soon plz and ty
Date: 03/19/2010 11:41:00 PM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
I love this! I love the 'stream of consciousness' style during their lovemaking, because who actually has complete thoughts while they're in the throes of genuine passion? And, of course, the last line is just too wonderful.
Best line: "And I have a sinking suspicion those garbled noises aren't staying in my head." Hilarious! The Wolverine babbling over a girl's breasts! Of course, not just ANY girl, but still...HAHAHAHA! --Wendie
Author's Response: I always love your reviews-they are always so thorough, so reliable, and generous. I hope you like the last chapter.
Date: 03/19/2010 6:49:47 PM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
I loved it. It wasn't the hottest sex scene ever written but I love how it gave us insight into Logan's mind. It is awesome that Logan was so into (no pun intended. lol) it.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/19/2010 4:56:24 PM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
Holy Flippidyistypickle! For someone who hasn't written something like this before you did a wonderful job! Just the right blend of...ahem.."action" & sweetness.
Gotta love the shout out to what should be the world's most appropriate euphemism too ;P
Author's Response: >bows< I'm so happy you agree with the euphamism.
Date: 03/19/2010 3:47:14 PM Title: Gravity: The Inevitable Pull or Friction: When Rubbed Together.
Loved it!!!