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[Report This]Date: 07/17/2014 12:41:42 AM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
"Jean was wrong. The Good Guy doesn't stick around. The Good Guy leaves." --Love this line. So much said in just those words.
"Lo-having feelings for her?" Logan's little slip-up made me smile.
And when Logan finally confesses his feelings...the way he stammers and then closes his eyes expecting the worst...and Marie's answer...o.m.g. I can't even put into words...
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2010 7:19:32 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
i really like the quick phrasing and phrase fragments...it really shows the pace of their movements, the rising tension, the difficulty to be restrained.
i think it was reeeeeally hot!
Date: 03/17/2010 7:57:16 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
I'm a pervert, a bastard, a lech. Hell, a thousand names but they all add up to animal.
I truely love that line. A lot. I think this was my favorite chapter. Love the playdough legs. Love that it didn't take 17 chapters after he realised things for him to say something. I loved her response. Absolutely perfect. So glad I tried out this story. It's beautiful.
~Mia
Date: 03/16/2010 10:33:51 AM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
Aww I love this story. I love Logan's admission. It was so sweet. Marie's response was perfect.
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2010 12:15:47 AM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
i LOVE it........update real soon k? plz
Date: 03/15/2010 7:55:16 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
I am so thoroughly jealous of your ability to capture my favorite feral in all his 'holy-shit-what-do-I-do-now?' glory. Bobby 'the squealer' lashed to the jet was priceless! And you have managed to make me hate Jean even more than I already did--and like Logan said--'that's fucking saying something'. I am oh so ready for more. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2010 6:25:32 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
Love this chapter! I was so worried how it was going to be messed up by his fears, but what a great short and sweet conversation. you've got me. :)
Date: 03/15/2010 5:16:03 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
I can understand how hard it must be to write Logan in love as you mentioned (even though I don't write myself, but that just goes to show..). Anyway I think you did a great job! I always figured he'd be gruffer and try harder to fit the Wolverine image once he finds out how he feels since he's not familiar with warm fuzzy feelings.
I rally liked seeing his struggle here & the ending was a nice balance of new-to-these-feelings-awkward Logan & melty-lock-the-door-&-just-you-wait goodness :)
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2010 4:52:06 PM Title: Bouyancy: Sink or Float
Love it! I think you captured Logan in love perfectly, can't wait for the smut! Uhhh, I mean I hope the romance progresses soon. yeah, no, I mean I can't wait for the smut!