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[Report This]Date: 07/17/2014 12:16:12 AM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
This was a great chapter to read. Logan's frustration with the students and his narrative are hilarious. And the part where he doesn't know how to deal with Marie being sick is funny, too-- especially when he thinks he is supposed to get her root beer.
The part in the end where each sentence begins with "I wonder why..." And then we come to the conclusion with "Oh. *Oh*"--love that! I swear my insides got all tickly and squishy when I read that.
You have such a gift with words!
Date: 03/17/2010 7:44:13 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
Here's your flipiddyistypickle.
Wonderful chapter. I love how you didn't automatically make Logan irritated and impervious to curvatious redheads. I love that he still goes out for a pint and a bimbo. I love that he notices and really cares about Rogue without obsessing so much that all we hear from your story is OMG her scent her skin her ass her her her can't stop thinking about her what did I ever see in Jean... You have the perfect mixture of cannon Wolverine and classic fannon. It makes for a beautiful reading.
The Schindler's list line absolutely floored me. I've never read it or seen it and never will. But I was mesmerised by that part.
~Mia
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2010 2:05:01 AM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
*oh*
i love how sooooooo much is put into that one tiny syllable!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 1:31:53 AM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
update asap! romance in store for the two?
Author's Response: Hang tight, I'm righting the last scenes now. You'll probably get it Sunday afternoon. This was a toughie.
Date: 03/06/2010 9:54:35 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
Heee!
I love how it doesn't even occur to Logan at first to wonder about how out-of-his-ordinary his reactions to Marie are. Your characterisation of him just enjoying things about her and wondering about those odd reactions later is perfect; he has no memory of love, so it's natural he wouldn't recognise it at first.
The touching scene and Marie's break-up and the switch was just perfect and I loved seeing it from his perspective. All hail Logan in love!
I also quite enjoyed your literary references :-)
Melanie
P.S. - Review, please! is "Revisez, s'il vous plait!" in French and "Bitte eine Kritik geben!" in German. Just FYI.
Author's Response: Thank you!!(exclamation points times four).nnI apologize for the language mistake. I used an online transator.
Date: 03/06/2010 6:30:27 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
I loved that last *oh.* this chapter was a thing of beauty. Great job. I can't wait to know how he reacts to this revelation.
Author's Response: As ever, thank you. But this one made me bounce in my chair.
Date: 03/06/2010 5:18:15 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
Holy flipiddyistypickle! (that's my attempt at Nonsense - I can barely master English as it is). I loved this! There were some excellent lines throughout this, but my fave part was Marie being sick & Logan, of course, not really having any concept of what normal recovery time is.
What was even better than that was his realization of how he feels. It wasn't a punch in the face of wordy exposition- this felt natural, like he was kind of blindsided by it after being preoccupied with his lusty wrong feelings for Jean.
My favorite chapter so far :D
Author's Response: >hugs super tight< I must have read your review ten times. Gracias.
Date: 03/06/2010 4:00:14 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
Then flipiddyistypickle for you, dear girl!
'Oh' is effin' right.
Lovely chapter, perfect title. Love all the bright little stars that make up this amazing constellation. More, more, more --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2010 2:54:20 PM Title: Constellations: Connecting The Dots
I am truly enjoying your story, I'm always happy to see an update. Unlike many other stories I'm trying to keep up with, this one almost feels like each chapter is a stand-alone fic, while still being tied to the others.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!!