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[Report This]Date: 02/21/2010 12:44:18 AM Title: Covalent: Bond By Sharing
i LOVE it. i love how ur showing how theyre bonding unlike they did in the movie. cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 02/20/2010 10:45:13 PM Title: Covalent: Bond By Sharing
Nicely done! A few lines are stand-outs:
'(**we're still working on that-the way he grabbed her arm-we're still working on that**)' -- like it's on a loop, playing over and over in his head with his little editorial comment added. Very cool.
"A scent reaches my nose that I can not and would not describe to anyone, ever- some things are private, you know? -one that would make a lesser man shiver." -- Gave me goosebumps!
and, of course,
"I think you're perfect, Kid." -- *sigh*
I am SO looking forward to more. --Wendie
Date: 02/20/2010 9:02:28 PM Title: Covalent: Bond By Sharing
Love that Logan wants Marie. Awesome story. update soon.
Date: 02/20/2010 12:07:09 PM Title: Covalent: Bond By Sharing
Still loving this! I'm so glad you updated, I am invested in several WIP's that seem to have trailed off. Please keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. This chapter took a little longer to finish, but Im trying to post twice a week. Thank you so, so much. Its the reviews that keep me going. :)
Date: 02/20/2010 12:02:22 PM Title: Covalent: Bond By Sharing
"I'm not an alcoholic, I'm just drunkenly inclined." If I say that I'd use this excuse in real life would you judge me?
This chapter had some serious laugh out loud moments. I love when writers can get a handle on Logan's sense of humor. Not that anyone should admit that he has one to his face. Oh no, bad idea.
Author's Response: I would love to say that the particular line you quoted was mine, but I have to give credit where it is due. A wonderful person put that up for adoption on Nanowrimo, and it inspired that scene. (Everything else is, of course, my own.) Thank you for reviewing!