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Date: 02/10/2010 11:09:03 PM Title: Inertia: In Constant Motion
I honestly loved the bit about his fantasizing about Jean and him getting caught by Scott. It was lol worthy. Again I enjoy the fact that he isn't so much in love with Marie at this point, he's just attached to her. The easing of his guilt by sending gifts is a good idea as well, and I'd be intrigued to see exactly how Marie would/will react to these little gifts.
Much love, and luck with the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Cookies and brownies for you.
Date: 02/09/2010 8:43:42 PM Title: Inertia: In Constant Motion
I like how you're balancing Jean & Marie in Logan's head. While some of us (*raises hand*) would enjoy just tossing the good doctor out of the jet so she doesn't get in the way of things happening between L&M, I do like this. It's more believable since she appeals to all of Logan's lusty wrong feelings, but we see that Marie wormed her way into Logan's brain - great set up & I can't wait for him to realize that she's more than a kid he made a promise to :)
Author's Response: I would LOVE to see Jean tossed out of the jet. And then trampled. By a thousand raging Rogan fans wearing tshirts with Hugh Jackman's face on them. Heck, maybe I could work it in. ;)nnThank you, thank you thank you thank you. I have the biggest smile on my face right now.
Date: 02/08/2010 12:17:07 PM Title: Inertia: In Constant Motion
I like that she's under his skin, but he doesn't quite know what to do about it. He's comfortable with physical contact, but not emotional ties--she's just the opposite, which brings us to another aspect of science: Magnetism--Opposites Attract. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you very very very much-for both your reviews. Your cookies are in the oven and the poodle is being shipped now-yes, I put airholes in the box.nnThank you for telling me about the spacing, I'll do that in the next chapters. I'll certainly change "elimination"! You're right, spellcheck sucks sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2010 1:21:57 AM Title: Inertia: In Constant Motion
:D i LOVE it, plz keep updating, love the idea of logan sending things to rogue
Author's Response: I wish I could tell you something that would express how happy your reviews make me. Thank you thank you thank you. I hope you continue enjoying the story(and reviewing-cough cough).
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2010 1:18:40 PM Title: Inertia: In Constant Motion
A poodle you say? :) Awesome story, so keep going. I, for one, certainly don't hate it. :D
Author's Response: Indeed, a poodle. He's very friendly. And smart. And imaginary. Thank you!!!!