Hi,
Finally getting to the review :). So, I reread this today, had a not so great day and wanted to read something that would make me smile..and it did. I realized I usually end up making a list in my reviews..always find I want to talk about different points..so here it goes again, lol.
-I liked the slow, measured pace of the story..it matched Logan’s slow and careful revelations about his feelings for Marie. Of course, the feelings were always there..it was just so Logan-ish how he admitted them (to himself) one at a time.
-I like the descriptions of Marie he (you :D) gave. The braid, the dress, sitting on a bench/sofa etc..not too detailed, the way I imagine he’d give, but knowing a nice from him really is nice.
-I think my fave. chapter was when he realized he loved her..when he was wondering why everything about her affected him differently and then his aha moment..very sweet. That said, the chapter when they make love is running a close second for fave.:D..there was such a tenderness and sweetness about it..really nicely done.
-And finally, at the end when he went to see Marie, I thought he’d do his usual-I’m not good enough for you and will leave speech-and figured she’d tell him to get a clue and leave with him (and while that’s good enough in its own right) I was really surprised when he popped the ring/question..wasn’t expecting it..but it was perfectly right.
Thank you for this truly lovely story..there are some stories I go back to time and again and this is now one of them.
P.S. Dinner would be on me.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lists, lol. They make my day. :~) .... It's an unbelievable thrill to know my writing could fix someone's bad day, that anyone would reread a fic of mine. >hugs, does happy dance< Thank you.

Was a little worried when I read the first sentence, my imagination was visited by visions of Marie, dead [once again], lo and behold it was only our dear Wolvie.
I'm loving how you have him portrayed, and the bit about angel wings is beautiful. Short sweet and to the point, as they say.
The little snippets of his immediate, well at this point I may not say attraction so much as a friendliness, for Marie are wonderful.
Continue on with your story, and good luck with inspiration. Science is always full of ideas!

Who knew geeky science stuff could translate into this delicious peek into Logan's head. Your writing is clear and crisp, your 'Logan voice' is very much in character and your last two lines take this from merely good to outstanding. I look forward to more lessons in the 'science' that is Logan.

Now for my 15 cookies: try putting a space between each paragraph -- yes, even the one-line paragraphs (especially them, really)-- it makes it easier to read. To separate whole sections use a line or some other symbol or extra spaces. Oh, and somehow I don't think you meant to say the directions to Alkali Lake were 'eliminated'. I'm guessing 'laminated' maybe? Don't you just hate it when Spell Check can't tell what you're thinking? --Wendie