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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:32:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jumping Jehoshaphat! I did NOT see that coming! Not only was there no threesome *disappointed sigh*, but Donelle is doing the PROFESSOR! Wild!

This is an awesome story! Logan finally takes Marie as his mate and the Professor gets a lover to boot! Nice job!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:45:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wooaaaah was not expecting that. Nice twist though!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 12:21:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh wythc, i'm sorry i hope i didn't offend you, i was just so suprised by that twist it blew my mind

Author's Response: Sokay. I'm just a tad sensitive about this ending. I'm glad it was surprising though.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 7:34:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

OH MY GOD EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

*shriek*

HAHAHAHAHAHAAA! you totally caught me utterly off guard with that ending LMAO!

i know you probably didn't mean for it to be funny but i literaly screamed EEEWWWWWWWWWW when i Xavier was getting some! hee hee!

Author's Response: Why would it be eww? Xavier is a man. Not a bad looking one either, its not his fault he's in the chair.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 4:10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow, i didn't expect that ending. I like the unexpected. great job with shocking me! lol

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 1:03:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

First you gave us Morgan who I have a huge soft spot for then Donella. Your O.C's are as real as the charcters we've come to love. Not only did you bring Logan and Rogue together you had Charles find love. Donella's back story was both heart-breaking and beautiful.
Can't wait to read the journey you take us on next. All I can say is well done and thank you.

Author's Response: Aww thanks. Morgan was a fun character. Unfortunately my OC's don't tend to transfer over well into other stories. I'm hoping to continue this thread with Donella though.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:41:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

WHOA!!! *triple take* That last paragraph is a whiplasher, Wytching!! I loved it!!! Totally out of left field, yet somehow appropriate. Fine job!! Damn fine job!

Author's Response: Predictability is what has killed more than a few of my favorite series. I like to keep people on their toes.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 11:42:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Aww It's nice you included him. :-D most people forget he has a penis lol. xXx

Author's Response: LOL. I'll admit I am a Logan girl but from time to time I indulge in Xavier fantasies.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 11:14:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, girl, that wasn't a surprise ending--it was a holy-shit-I-can't-believe-I-just-read-that shock! But what a marvelous idea! I've always wondered if Wheels would ever find love. He certainly deserves to, considering how far he's willing to go to see that his 'kids' are happy! Excellent! --Wendie

Author's Response: lol. Glad you liked it. It occurred to me last night while I was sleeping. Love it when my stories finish themselves.

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