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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:14:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Why Grandma, what lovely smut you write! *big grin* Well, it's nice to see that Marie has turned the tables on Logan. It's usually her that becomes jealous seeing him with other women. It would be interesting to see if Donella is able to arrange a threesome with our favorite couple.

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:39:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw kinky!!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:26:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

OOoohhhhhhh Wytchling.... this is gonna be good, I can tell!!! heh heh heh

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 9:47:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh logan is such a cruel bastard. i love it *evil grin*

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 6:30:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

If both of them are keeping her frustrated, Rogue doesn't stand a chance; she'll be begging for that threesome and soon--and that ain't gonna be a bad thing! --Wendie

Author's Response: Not a bad thing at all.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 3:53:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

GOD DAMNIT!

This chapter made mot only Logan ad Rogue frustrated, but me as well. Life is not fair. ;)

Update soon please!

Author's Response: This is what happens when my husband has been gone for a week and I haven't gotten my nookie.

Reviewer: Ms_H_Wallbanger Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 11:33:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hmm, I've never really tried reading any bi fan fics, but I'm enjoying this. Also, way to create an original character who isn't annoying or an obvious author avatar. I feel like that rarely happens. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Then more you shall have.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 5:26:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

it still makes me pissed that Logan is sleeping with that tramp.

Author's Response: He sleeps with women he picks up in bars. At least Donella is free of disease.

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 2:54:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Logan is evil no fair getting a girl all worked up. Donella is my kinda chick knows who and what she wants and doesn't let anybody stand in her way. Now that is sex appeal.

Author's Response: Donella is a character I've used in role playing games for a long long time. She's the me I wish I could be.

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