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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:02:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG! A threesome with Scott and Jean! I would have LOVED to see the expression on their faces when she dropped THAT into the conversion! Well, since she hasn't been catty or make fun of Rogue and wants to HELP her land Logan, she can't be all bad. I'm not too surprised that Rogue was willing to enter a sexual relationship with another woman; sometimes attraction is based on more that what's between a person's legs. Plus she has all those guys in head! I'm amazed she doesn't hit on more women!

If nothing else, you get high marks for introducing a new character and not following the somewhat overused plot line where Logan sleeps with Jean, Scott and Marie turn to each other for comfort, one or both couples make up, and they all live happily ever after.

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:36:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hehe, suck it Jean!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:22:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG!! Would LOVE to have been a fly on the wall when Donella made that offer!!! Bwah ha ha ha ha ha

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 9:42:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

oh Donella and Rogue...crafty witches, those two.

and Donella would probably be wasted on Jean and Scott LOL

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 3:45:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

XDDDDDDD

Poor Scooter. He gets so fucked over in all of these Fan fictions.

Author's Response: He's had one ten second clip. I've been nice to the uptight ass.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 2:51:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Your Rogue is certainly more adventurous than I would have imagined her to be, downright bold even, with that lip lock right there in the kitchen. Wouldn't it be funny if, once Rogue gets Logan all to herself, Donella tapped into some hidden lesbian tendencies in Jean and she just swung totally the other way? --Wendie

Author's Response: See I always saw Rogue as more a follower than leader or at the very least someone who would like leadership. Donella, She's a leader. And I've thought of that but it would be a different story arc.

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 12:24:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

I probably shouldn't have offered to have a three way with her and Scott. lol priceless some lines almost need to be framed and thats one of them. More soon please

Author's Response: Thanks.

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