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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 6:45:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have to say that even with the hint from the last chapter, I was still a little surprised by the way this story appears to be unfolding. It seems like Rogue is showing more interest in Donella that Logan!

Well, I'm still impressed with the quality of writing and grammar. I just hope that Logan and Marie get together in the end.

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:34:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hehe Logan looks like you got some nerve wracking times ahead...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:19:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOLOLOL I love it when Logan has to step back and go "Awww shit!" It usually means something good is gonna happen soon!!! Heh heh heh

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 3:31:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

Logan is screwed.

And Rogue doesn't know what she is getting herself into.

And Donella is just gunna get boned.

I love this story. :D

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 7:13:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, got what you meant by Like, capital 'L'. I don't know how subtle you were trying to be, but if you wanted to be more obvious about the emphasis, you could use italics, or all capital letters. Both will get people's attention more fully than one capital letter. Just a thought.

I'm loving that the little minx is using this ploy to get his attention. More, please. --Wendie

Author's Response: For some reason the format won't let me use italics and all caps makes it seem like I'm shouting and I hate that. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 6:14:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

STUPID HEAD!!!!!!! xXx

Author's Response: Yup.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 5:37:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

lol ok This must be Rogue's plan... i am still reading and holding my breath as to what is going to happen. update soon.

Author's Response: Rogue is using a classic ploy. I won't tell you which one yet but its a classic. I used it myself to get my hubby.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 4:14:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

what? lofan didn't JUMP at the idea of Rogue and Donella together...with him in the middle of a Manwich? LOL!

"sometimes this place needs some shakin' up."

"So get Avalanche to drop by."

love those lines!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I try to come up with funny zingers. Some days are better than others.

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