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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:32:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jumping Jehoshaphat! I did NOT see that coming! Not only was there no threesome *disappointed sigh*, but Donelle is doing the PROFESSOR! Wild!

This is an awesome story! Logan finally takes Marie as his mate and the Professor gets a lover to boot! Nice job!

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Date: 05/26/2014 7:23:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ahhh, that was so sweet. Donella appears to actually care about Rogue (her plan to have sex with both of them a the same time not withstanding) and wants her to be happy with him. Hopefully this will get Logan off his "grumpy old cuss" but and tell her how he feels about her. This fic just gets better and better!

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:14:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Why Grandma, what lovely smut you write! *big grin* Well, it's nice to see that Marie has turned the tables on Logan. It's usually her that becomes jealous seeing him with other women. It would be interesting to see if Donella is able to arrange a threesome with our favorite couple.

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 7:02:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG! A threesome with Scott and Jean! I would have LOVED to see the expression on their faces when she dropped THAT into the conversion! Well, since she hasn't been catty or make fun of Rogue and wants to HELP her land Logan, she can't be all bad. I'm not too surprised that Rogue was willing to enter a sexual relationship with another woman; sometimes attraction is based on more that what's between a person's legs. Plus she has all those guys in head! I'm amazed she doesn't hit on more women!

If nothing else, you get high marks for introducing a new character and not following the somewhat overused plot line where Logan sleeps with Jean, Scott and Marie turn to each other for comfort, one or both couples make up, and they all live happily ever after.

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 6:45:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have to say that even with the hint from the last chapter, I was still a little surprised by the way this story appears to be unfolding. It seems like Rogue is showing more interest in Donella that Logan!

Well, I'm still impressed with the quality of writing and grammar. I just hope that Logan and Marie get together in the end.

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 6:35:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's worse that I feared; she's a slut that swings both ways! And the last line has me VERY worried! Forget her making Logan hurt Rogue, she might get ROGUE to hurt LOGAN! Which would serve him right for bring her to the Mansion in the first place!

Despite the whole let's-bring-in-another-woman-to-make-problems-for-Logan-and-Marie, I like the fact that this isn't just another Marie/Logan/Jean triangle story. It has good grammar and spelling, too.

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2014 6:22:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Logan comes back to the Mansion with some slut (well, I don't know if she's a slut or not, but she's not Rogue, so I automatically hate her!); he's attracted to her, but he doesn't seem to be determined to see Rogue as a "kid", so there's hope this will not end in heartache for her. If this Donella causes problems for our favorite couple, I hope Rogue sucks her dry!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:45:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wooaaaah was not expecting that. Nice twist though!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:42:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for making him admit it!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:39:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw kinky!!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:36:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hehe, suck it Jean!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:34:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hehe Logan looks like you got some nerve wracking times ahead...

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:31:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh this sounds interesting!!!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 1:24:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im glad we see how Logan feels, Im sure that will prevent confusion on my part, as I am easily confused, lol

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 12:21:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh wythc, i'm sorry i hope i didn't offend you, i was just so suprised by that twist it blew my mind

Author's Response: Sokay. I'm just a tad sensitive about this ending. I'm glad it was surprising though.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 7:34:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

OH MY GOD EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

*shriek*

HAHAHAHAHAHAAA! you totally caught me utterly off guard with that ending LMAO!

i know you probably didn't mean for it to be funny but i literaly screamed EEEWWWWWWWWWW when i Xavier was getting some! hee hee!

Author's Response: Why would it be eww? Xavier is a man. Not a bad looking one either, its not his fault he's in the chair.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 4:10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow, i didn't expect that ending. I like the unexpected. great job with shocking me! lol

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 1:03:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

First you gave us Morgan who I have a huge soft spot for then Donella. Your O.C's are as real as the charcters we've come to love. Not only did you bring Logan and Rogue together you had Charles find love. Donella's back story was both heart-breaking and beautiful.
Can't wait to read the journey you take us on next. All I can say is well done and thank you.

Author's Response: Aww thanks. Morgan was a fun character. Unfortunately my OC's don't tend to transfer over well into other stories. I'm hoping to continue this thread with Donella though.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:54:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

"I gave up suppressing evil cackles after my therapist told me I was going to choke to death on them." OMFG!!! I LOVED this!!!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:41:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

WHOA!!! *triple take* That last paragraph is a whiplasher, Wytching!! I loved it!!! Totally out of left field, yet somehow appropriate. Fine job!! Damn fine job!

Author's Response: Predictability is what has killed more than a few of my favorite series. I like to keep people on their toes.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:26:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

OOoohhhhhhh Wytchling.... this is gonna be good, I can tell!!! heh heh heh

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:22:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG!! Would LOVE to have been a fly on the wall when Donella made that offer!!! Bwah ha ha ha ha ha

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:19:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOLOLOL I love it when Logan has to step back and go "Awww shit!" It usually means something good is gonna happen soon!!! Heh heh heh

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 11:42:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Aww It's nice you included him. :-D most people forget he has a penis lol. xXx

Author's Response: LOL. I'll admit I am a Logan girl but from time to time I indulge in Xavier fantasies.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 11:14:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, girl, that wasn't a surprise ending--it was a holy-shit-I-can't-believe-I-just-read-that shock! But what a marvelous idea! I've always wondered if Wheels would ever find love. He certainly deserves to, considering how far he's willing to go to see that his 'kids' are happy! Excellent! --Wendie

Author's Response: lol. Glad you liked it. It occurred to me last night while I was sleeping. Love it when my stories finish themselves.

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