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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 3:53:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love little Draven. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 10:27:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

I feel for Rogue, even having a daddy there that helps it's hard work being a mommy. Logan better get an ass whoopin'!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 6:40:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter :-D xXx

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 10:22:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Logan better get his hairy butt back home. He's got a kid!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 2:55:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

oooooo good start cant wait to see what comes next. update soon plz

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 9:12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

did he know she was pregnant when he left? if so he is such a bastard...well, he's a bastard anyways for leaving her.

sometime i wish rogue didn't love him when he's such a jerk and careless with her. then it works out and i do a happy dance.

Author's Response: Hahaha. He didn't know she was pregnant. I know how in other fan fics he can 'sense' or smell when she is pregnant. But I was going to do a chapter where she entirely relives the last fight that they had after a steamy night of sex. He leaves the next day and hasn't been heard from since. So on the one hand yes he is a bastard for leaving her, but in the other it isn't his fault that he didn't know he left her pregnant.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 7:55:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter. Why did you call him Draven? I've never heard that name before. xXx

Author's Response: I have always wanted to name my son Draven Dante. But I'm too young to have kids yet, gotta get through college first. Until then the name will live in my Fan Fiction. It will eventually have meaning in the story. I promise.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 6:55:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow why is Marie still pitying her self after 4 years. The thing I love most about her is her strength. All this whining about Logan seems kinda weak. she needs to realize yes she loves him but he is the one who left. He doesn't deserve her tears right now.

On a technical note the i like the longer chapter. it feels more complete and less rushed.

Author's Response: That was the angle I was going for. The first chapter was a brief opening. I wanted to see how people responded before I went on. But I wanted to emphasize in the first 2 chapters the pain and the loneliness that she feels before giving her the 'Fuck him, I deserve better' attitude.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 6:12:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

"It hurts so much to see someone who is so much like you grow a little more everyday and not have you here to share in the experience." This is positively heartbreaking. There was nothing wrong with the first one, but yes, this is better. Now, all we need is for 'daddy' to come home. --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 5:03:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

“I love him with all that I am. I would instantly give my life for him. And Logan doesn't even know he has a son.”

This story is extremely well written, heavy with angst and heartbreak. Love it! x

Author's Response: Thank you. I am very flattered.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 3:03:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

You HAVE to continue this. or else >:-| I'll send the pixies after you and you don't want that my friend. xXx

Author's Response: Pixies? Shit now I know I'm in trouble. XD

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 12:28:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

what an ass hole logan was. He better have a good explanation for leaving!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 11:45:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. 'Draven' is a very unusual name. Is there a story behind it, too? I look forward to more. --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 10:05:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

This pulled at my heartstrings. The way you describe them wanting each other is so passionate, and yet now she’s alone and her need for him to return is desperate. You must continue this. *fav* x

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