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Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 3:27:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Your story makes me angry with Logan, and I guess to stir up that emotion demonstrates that you’ve written this very well. Okay, fair enough if he wanted to give her time to grow-up, but at least explain that to her before leaving for four years -- four years damn it! -- without a word. Pregnant or not, I don’t think I could forgive his actions. But I wonder how different things would have been if he’d have known she was pregnant? Oh, the WRFA world can be a cruel one... :-)

Great closing line too. x

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 1:05:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

OK, four years is a bit long to wait if the only reason he stayed away was to give her time to 'grow up', but neither of them knew she was pregnant when he left. The man she fell in love with is not someone who shirks responsibility--and she knows it, has always known it. How hard did she try to find him? What with Cerebro sittin' downstairs and a baby on the way, I'd have thought she'd have had the professor firin' that thing up 'in a heartbeat', as Logan said. Somehow I'm not getting where she has a right to all this righteous indignation. I'm looking forward to how all of this gets resolved. --Wendie

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 12:24:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

He had all of it coming. I'd have said much worse to him. I like how this is going. More soon please?

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 8:19:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

Feedback here. Please do continue. I love it. She should not just forgive him. He did not deserve it. Yet ;-)

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