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Reviewer: Ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2010 9:13:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

There better be another chapter,im dying here.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 9:12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

did he know she was pregnant when he left? if so he is such a bastard...well, he's a bastard anyways for leaving her.

sometime i wish rogue didn't love him when he's such a jerk and careless with her. then it works out and i do a happy dance.

Author's Response: Hahaha. He didn't know she was pregnant. I know how in other fan fics he can 'sense' or smell when she is pregnant. But I was going to do a chapter where she entirely relives the last fight that they had after a steamy night of sex. He leaves the next day and hasn't been heard from since. So on the one hand yes he is a bastard for leaving her, but in the other it isn't his fault that he didn't know he left her pregnant.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 6:55:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow why is Marie still pitying her self after 4 years. The thing I love most about her is her strength. All this whining about Logan seems kinda weak. she needs to realize yes she loves him but he is the one who left. He doesn't deserve her tears right now.

On a technical note the i like the longer chapter. it feels more complete and less rushed.

Author's Response: That was the angle I was going for. The first chapter was a brief opening. I wanted to see how people responded before I went on. But I wanted to emphasize in the first 2 chapters the pain and the loneliness that she feels before giving her the 'Fuck him, I deserve better' attitude.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 3:03:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

You HAVE to continue this. or else >:-| I'll send the pixies after you and you don't want that my friend. xXx

Author's Response: Pixies? Shit now I know I'm in trouble. XD

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 12:28:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

what an ass hole logan was. He better have a good explanation for leaving!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 11:45:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. 'Draven' is a very unusual name. Is there a story behind it, too? I look forward to more. --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 10:05:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

This pulled at my heartstrings. The way you describe them wanting each other is so passionate, and yet now she’s alone and her need for him to return is desperate. You must continue this. *fav* x

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