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Reviewer: Ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2010 9:13:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

There better be another chapter,im dying here.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2010 3:53:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait till Logan catches Rogue at her sexy best (or at least, I hope he does!).

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2010 6:50:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

I wish her all the luck in the world with her plans. But if Logan is half the man I hope he is, he'll smile and wave and tell her to have a good time and not to worry about Draven...and she'll be miserable as hell all night.

Fave bit: 'melt the devil's eyebrows off'. LOL!

Great chapter. --Wendie

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2010 12:59:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

I looooooooooooove it! soooooooo cute! next chapter plz and ty!

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2010 7:05:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 1:41:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yay - a very amusing and enjoyable chapter. I wonder if Rogue will be as forgiving as Draven?

"Well I'll be damned. The kid has the most adorable pout... I'm almost tempted to give him a cookie..." - LOL

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 8:44:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

"Are you my Daddy?"
"Yes."
A few seconds of silence. So very awkward.
"Good."
"Why is that good?"
"...'cause I like you."
Logan snorted. He snorted with laughter. The big bad Wolverine SNORTED.
"I like ya too kiddo."

This is my favorite line ever!!! Hurry and update again!!!!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 4:11:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

I cannot imagine a more perfect beginning to Logan's relationship with his son. And I'm glad he's been miserable for the last four years. Serves him right if he really let his pride keep him away. Big idiot. Something tells me once Mama sees father and son together, her heart will turn to hot butter and just melt all over the place. I know mine would. --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 3:27:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Your story makes me angry with Logan, and I guess to stir up that emotion demonstrates that you’ve written this very well. Okay, fair enough if he wanted to give her time to grow-up, but at least explain that to her before leaving for four years -- four years damn it! -- without a word. Pregnant or not, I don’t think I could forgive his actions. But I wonder how different things would have been if he’d have known she was pregnant? Oh, the WRFA world can be a cruel one... :-)

Great closing line too. x

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 1:05:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

OK, four years is a bit long to wait if the only reason he stayed away was to give her time to 'grow up', but neither of them knew she was pregnant when he left. The man she fell in love with is not someone who shirks responsibility--and she knows it, has always known it. How hard did she try to find him? What with Cerebro sittin' downstairs and a baby on the way, I'd have thought she'd have had the professor firin' that thing up 'in a heartbeat', as Logan said. Somehow I'm not getting where she has a right to all this righteous indignation. I'm looking forward to how all of this gets resolved. --Wendie

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 12:24:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

He had all of it coming. I'd have said much worse to him. I like how this is going. More soon please?

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 8:19:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

Feedback here. Please do continue. I love it. She should not just forgive him. He did not deserve it. Yet ;-)

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 12:54:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

grrrr u update asap plz

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 10:46:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

AHHHHH! You stopped there?! Nooooo

I've been neglecting to review this so I guess I deserve that cliffy.

I have to say that I absolutely love Draven (and I can't believe that someone else has heard of this name - my sister was obsessed with the name, but alas, had a girl instead). Anyway, I'm glad that Marie found her backbone - WalMart really does have everything. Can't wait to see how Logan is going to dig himself out of this one!

Author's Response: Hahaha, the cliffie will be filled possibly tonight. But I'm glad you're enjoying it!rnrn1.) I LOVE THE NAME. I have for over 3 years now. 2.) She has so much more backbone to show. The amount of rage she is going to unleash on him... is going to be great. 3.) I don't think Logan is going to be able to dig himself out of this one anytime soon!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 10:30:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great cliffie! I waited on pins and needles through that whole shower for him to show up. Felt like I was watching 'Psycho' without the big knife. I'm so glad you're updating this story again. Can't wait to see if all of her 'I don't need Logan anymore' resolve holds up with her naked and him standing in front of her 'in the flesh', so to speak. --Wendie

Author's Response: I should be updating very very soon, I'm now no longer in the clutches of writer's block. So we'll see how she ends up reacting. Thanks for keeping up! :)

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 12:20:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, I love this story and I’m so glad I’ve finally been able to catch up with it. The end of chapter three was brilliant and in chapter four, Logan’s first words when he saw Draven – “You have got to be shitting me.” – is so perfectly Logan – haha! I can’t wait to see how he deals with his ‘mini-me’ and what happens when he’s faced with the wrath of the Rogue... x

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2010 6:07:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well, I love that Logan knows Draven is his just by sight. But Logan's attitude about Marie taking him back whether she likes it or not--that is gonna cause a few fireworks, now ain't it? So glad you updated and can't wait for more. --Wendie

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2010 2:13:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

Finally he knows! It's about time Logan ran into a pint sized hell raiser who can give him a run for his money. Can't wait to see how Marie reacts!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 10:27:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yeah. He was going to need a lot more beer.

Oh gods this is gonna be funny! More please and soon!

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 7:58:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oooh, awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 2:25:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

im eager for a next chapter. awesome this one was.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2010 8:27:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMG more please, this is becomming my one of my favorites. Hank is so sweet, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: snwbll1990r Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2010 4:01:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love little Draven. Oh boy is Logan going to have a rude awakeing. I hope all the men in the house kicks his ass 4 aways to Sunday. I hope Rogue makes him beg and not let him walk all over her again.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2010 5:29:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Where is that SOB!!??? There is some serious groweling he needs to do.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2010 2:59:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

o u evil evil person, leaving a cliff hanger like that. whens next update huh huh huh?

Author's Response: tomorrow, I promise.

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