The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Date: 02/16/2010 10:56:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love everything about this. Really, really love it. Can't wait for more. --Wendie
Date: 02/10/2010 8:01:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is a very interesting and intricate plot. I love that Victor's memories 'unlock' Logan's.
Great line: 'Logan despises killing. He's just good at it.' Eight words that sum up so much of the inner battle Logan lives with every day. Excellent. --Wendie
Date: 02/07/2010 3:12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
My hat is off to you, big time! Detailed action pieces like this are a challenge to write even when the language isn't an issue, but you made this look easy. I was on the edge of my chair through the whole thing--and then she grew claws! Whoo-hoo! I never saw that before--a physical manifestation of the mutation she absorbed from him--OUTSTANDING! I can't wait for the next chapter! --Wendie
Date: 02/06/2010 4:29:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow that was intense. I loved it. More please!
Date: 02/03/2010 11:53:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was delightful! A happy, but embarrassing (!), meeting with Marie's family is a rare treat on this site. Bravo! You are doing a great job of showing the emotions of both characters. Keep it up! --Wendie
Date: 02/02/2010 2:33:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this chapter. I find this entire story very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 8:35:08 PM Title: Prologue
ooooh, love the start!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 2:47:15 PM Title: Prologue
I like it :-D xXx
Date: 01/31/2010 12:08:29 PM Title: Prologue
This is really good. If you hadn't said English isn't your first language, I probably wouldn't have been able to tell. A misplaced modifier here and there (sorry, former English teacher talking here)...an adjective or two out of place are really the only mistakes I saw. You even wrote in Rogue's dialogue with the southern drawl, not so easy when even the basics of the language are unfamiliar. I really hope you continue this soon. --Wendie