Very well done! But I think you might have missed a translation--what does 'labile' mean? Something about Rogue's state of mind? I love that her brother is a mutant too. I missed that in the fight scene--so much was happening, it just went right by me. I'm glad her parents have realized their mistakes.

Great line: 'You know, when you jump I'm gonna follow you.' And he would, too.

Love their talk about 'that whole cursed day' and the 'fan club' comment is just precious. Looking forward to more! --Wendie

Author's Response: I'm always looking forward to your reviews! Thanks! I looked 'labile' up and it means in English and German the same concerning the psychic aspects /state of mind, but maybe it isn't the common use in English. I'll replace it with 'unstable'. It's just so inviting to use words that are the same (almost written and meaning) in both languages, but as it seems in this case the usage frequencies differ. Anyway, thanks for the advice!

loved this chapter. It was great! Cant wait to have Jimmy and Victor face to face!