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Reviewer: Corinne Signed 
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Date: 01/31/2010 8:35:08 PM Title: Prologue
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 8:35:08 PM Title: Prologue
ooooh, love the start!
Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 2:47:15 PM Title: Prologue
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I like it :-D xXx
Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 12:08:29 PM Title: Prologue
Date: 01/31/2010 12:08:29 PM Title: Prologue
This is really good. If you hadn't said English isn't your first language, I probably wouldn't have been able to tell. A misplaced modifier here and there (sorry, former English teacher talking here)...an adjective or two out of place are really the only mistakes I saw. You even wrote in Rogue's dialogue with the southern drawl, not so easy when even the basics of the language are unfamiliar. I really hope you continue this soon. --Wendie