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Date: 06/14/2011 7:28:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
A neat idea, having them on opposite teams, but still feeling the pull to be together. I hope you update this story one day.
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2010 2:32:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is so amazing, I am like in love with this story! I really hope you finish it sometime because it's sooo awesome! Purty please? ;-)
Date: 08/19/2010 1:08:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
I was just re reading this and I love it just as much as i did in January. Please get back to this story and finish writing it! Please??? Pretty please.?
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2010 5:22:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I meant to give this 4 stars. >blush<
And I'd really like to read what happens at that meeting, mentioned in the introduction.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2010 5:20:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was fantastic, and I'd really like to read more. This would be a great as the beginning of a series!
Your writing is wonderful, however, the punctuation is a bit...awkward. Just run it through microsoft word's grammar check. But again, the story itself is great. I love AUs.
Date: 02/12/2010 9:49:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well written, ice turn of phrases (review was right about paragraphs, though :-). Beautiful set of loyalties and conflicting attractions.
Sometimes the characters seem to speak or act out of the line you present us, though (is rogue really the type to be coy about compliments), and for my personal taste, you waste a wonderful idea and a very promising beginning by describing too much in summarci terms rather than letting unfold the story a LOT more slowly.
But I'm curious to see how you go from this introduction! Do keep going, we need more writers who know how to use their language! :-)
Date: 02/03/2010 9:42:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ooh! I really like this!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 8:25:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
damn, that was fast. but when you know, you know, right?
ok, let's see the action start jumping, some fights please! i like the start, pretty flirty and forbidden!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 8:20:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
i swear to god the song "Secret Lovers" just popped into my head in full chorus!
hitting on the enermy...naughty! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 1:05:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aww.. Thats lovely :-D xXx
Date: 01/31/2010 10:30:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Perfect description of Jubilee – “a never quit ball of energy.” Also: “Sometimes Rogue was tempted to drain her just for the peace and quiet.” – haha!
I love the twist that Wolvie is with the Brotherhood. I like to believe that a part of him questions his choice of side, so this fits well in my interpretation of all things X!. Great line: “The clean, calm scent of her even in battle had haunted him ever since and he longed to smell it mixed with his own.”
I’ll be following… x
P.S. Good advice from Moviemom about the spacing – it just makes it so much easier to read what I’m certain will be a great story.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 6:23:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
This was shorter than I would have wanted it. But the content of it was brilliant. I almost decided not to read it because it was short. But I took a chance and I loved it. Please write more!
Date: 01/31/2010 3:23:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Initially, I was shocked to find Logan on the 'wrong' side, but you have woven that 'error' into the story beautifully. You write very well. Once again, you first-timers threaten to outshine us all. I look forward to more. One formatting hint: put a space between paragraphs; it makes it so much easier to read. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2010 1:52:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooo yay keep goin with this
Date: 01/31/2010 1:13:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH I like this. very much. The idea that logan would reach out to Marie like that makes me melt. Please update fast and often!!!