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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 4:53:50 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it so much. I think Marie forgave Logan a bit too quickly though for his remark about her not being his type. He should have had to make it up to her.... *wink,wink*

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Date: 01/31/2010 7:30:28 PM Title: Don't Cry

woo hoo, glad remy is alive and not a total jerk.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 7:11:15 PM Title: Love Drunk

homegirl is getting around! this is sooo going to blow up in her face.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 7:11:10 PM Title: Love Drunk

homegirl is getting around! this is sooo going to blow up in her face.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 7:03:51 PM Title: Sudden Landing

whoa, is Rogue turning into a hot pants horny girl or something here? exciting!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 6:55:13 PM Title: Confession

woo hoo, straight to the point!

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Date: 01/31/2010 6:52:46 PM Title: Cold Hearted Crush

boo hiss, hate bobby!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 10:07:05 PM Title: Don't Cry

well that was unexpected. But I still am pissed at Logan for telling Jean that he wasn't interested in Rogue.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 9:31:50 AM Title: Get Out of Here

I wonder why Logan even cares. he already said that he didn't really care about Rogue. I love the switch you did with Remy. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 2:10:57 AM Title: Absolute Power Corrupts Absolutely

Interesting. I like that you're not all bogged down in the angsty stuff, but just sticking to the action and keeping the plot moving--at lightning speed, I might add. Nice job with Remy. I can hear him talking when I read his dialogue. --Wendie

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 9:25:59 PM Title: Show Me

Good lord. You update fast. I wish I was a diligent as you with my fics! I write fics for my soap OLTL and I update so infrequently people forget my stories. lol So Rogue had sex with Remy and he wants her to show him to the room. what room, cerebro? I love all these twists and turns. update again soon.

Author's Response: Haha, well I'm sixteen. What else have I got to do but write? :P But school starts up again on monday. *Sigh* Far less time.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 8:27:57 PM Title: Love Drunk

I'm looking forward to when all of this comes together, cause right now it feels a little 'scattered'. But you're posting updates so quickly that I don't mind trying to keep up with the whirlwind story line. --Wendie

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 8:23:46 PM Title: Love Drunk

well. now thats interesting. wonder what the other two asses with think of this.

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Date: 01/29/2010 7:48:41 PM Title: Let Me Go

Ok so Logan is an ass who just hurt Rogue and Bobby is a cheating ass who is going to hurt Rogue. I thought both of them were in love with her.... I hope Rogue gets mad and gets even with them! I can't wait to read more! I hope she shows those asses just what they just dissed!

Author's Response: :) I've got SO much more planned.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:40:57 PM Title: Waking Up

You sure are leaving all the possibilities open -- Gambit, Logan, Bobby--who will win Rogue's heart? --Wendie

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:29:16 PM Title: Long Trip

Personally, I think he'll add a welcome element to the 'triangle' of Bobby/Logan/Rogue, and you've nailed his ego perfectly, but he tends to refer to himself in the third person quite a bit.
For example, 'Whatever you say Cheri. But I know what I want.' is what he would say, but not the way he would say it.

'Whatever you say, chere. (this is the Cajun version of the French 'cheri'--Remy is more Cajun than French) But Remy know what he want.'

It's good to take chances. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I'll work on it.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:16:23 PM Title: Waking Up

ok i just can figure out who Rogue wants. I know who I want her to want but she is confusing me. love it. want more... lol update again soon!! :-)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 4:00:12 PM Title: Sudden Landing

I will leave a comment as commanded. lol I like this story. I find it really interesting so far. I even like Gambit so far. update soon!

Author's Response: I have updated as commanded. :P

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 2:12:20 PM Title: Shut Up

ok I am interested. I love that she zapped gambit. more please.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:12:59 AM Title: Shut Up

Clever girl, Rogue! Wow! Five chapters in one night--you are speedy! Keep 'em coming. --Wendie

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Date: 01/29/2010 3:17:58 AM Title: Confession

Whoo-hoo, won't Bobby be surprised to find out that his diamond-shaped 'hold' on Rogue didn't work? Little vixen! Why the hell can't people just say what they want and not go through all this angst and denial? This is going really well. Keep it up. --Wendie

Author's Response: Oh the daft destruction haha... Hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 3:12:02 AM Title: Cold Hearted Crush

I wonder how long it will be after Logan and Rogue leave that Bobby gets Kitty between the sheets? Ice Prick. I hope you give Logan the chance to do a little 'ice sculpture'. --Wendie

Author's Response: :D Never knowwww.

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