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Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:23:05 AM Title: Long Trip

Ooh I hope he tells Bobby!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:29:16 PM Title: Long Trip

Personally, I think he'll add a welcome element to the 'triangle' of Bobby/Logan/Rogue, and you've nailed his ego perfectly, but he tends to refer to himself in the third person quite a bit.
For example, 'Whatever you say Cheri. But I know what I want.' is what he would say, but not the way he would say it.

'Whatever you say, chere. (this is the Cajun version of the French 'cheri'--Remy is more Cajun than French) But Remy know what he want.'

It's good to take chances. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I'll work on it.

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