The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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I love it!!! The bit where he has to say he's her father is supersad/funny, lol. Great job so far!
I'm right there with ct_xfan, Bobby SO needs a good spiking. this ending did feel a little rushed, but it was definitely in keeping with the pace you set for the entire story. I really dug it that Logan finally told her he loved her. His promise to take care of her in the face of the coming opposition was a nice touch AND it sort of leaves the door open for a sequel--don't ya think? --Wendie
Liked the story, it definitely moved along at a lightening quick pace, almost too fast at some times for my taste. Some details could've used to be elaborated on; like "the room"...what room? Cerebro? Yes, a logical conclusion, but telling us outright would have not bogged us down with questions.
And Bobby...did you set out to make him a first class jack ass? If so, you nailed him!! How DARE his lousy, cheating ass call Rogue a whore!! I would have let Logan have at his sorry butt, 3 feet of adamantium would be too quick and too easy for the conniving SOB. And I totally agree with Wendie...HA HA on him that his little diamond shaped handcuffs didn't HOLD Rogue like he'd thought they would!
A nice start, I look forward to more good things from you!