Reviews For Temptation
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Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2012 8:46:31 PM Title: Epilogue

So cute!!!!!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 9:57:53 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh so sweet! I loved it!

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Date: 01/04/2011 9:56:45 AM Title: What Comes From Isolation

Aw so he does love her! Yay

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Date: 01/04/2011 8:41:50 AM Title: Don't Cry

Logan... Right? She'll be with Logan?

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:39:11 AM Title: Get Out of Here

Yay Logie's here to save her!!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:37:48 AM Title: Absolute Power Corrupts Absolutely

So NOW he cares about her, nice

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:35:19 AM Title: The kidnapping

Jeez asswipe

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:33:31 AM Title: Show Me

Aw no he's so mean! Logie! We need you!

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Date: 01/04/2011 8:31:34 AM Title: Love Drunk

Um. U suck Rogue

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:30:20 AM Title: Let Me Go

Oh dumb-ass Logan

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:28:06 AM Title: Waking Up

Jeez Bobby doesnt have a chance

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:26:35 AM Title: Get What You Came For

Hehehe tensioon

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Date: 01/04/2011 8:25:06 AM Title: Sudden Landing

Oh Marie, what are u doing? If ur gonna cheat on Bobby, at least do it with Logan!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:23:05 AM Title: Long Trip

Ooh I hope he tells Bobby!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:21:38 AM Title: Shut Up

I dont think she would really use her skin that casually, but its a good way to shut him up

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:19:29 AM Title: Introductions

Hehe nice line Rogue

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Date: 01/04/2011 8:17:54 AM Title: Confession

Wouldnt she have more of an issue with betraying Bobby? Eh, i like it anyways

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Date: 01/04/2011 8:15:19 AM Title: Cold Hearted Crush

Ugh dumb Bobby, you could have at least been more romantic! You should just hide your icy self in a hole, no one likes you, ya ice-prick

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 8:13:06 AM Title: The Hospital

I love it!!! The bit where he has to say he's her father is supersad/funny, lol. Great job so far!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 1:29:41 AM Title: Epilogue

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SQUEE* I can't believe it's over though. *pouts*

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 12:39:56 AM Title: Sudden Landing

HAHAHAHAHA. She gets around! but then again with Logan And Gambit, I can't blame her.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 12:23:33 AM Title: Cold Hearted Crush

NO NO NO NO GODMOTHER FUCKING DAMNIT NO NO NO. *Tears of sadness* I hate Bobby. :( NO NO NO.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2010 6:36:03 PM Title: The Hospital

I'm right there with ct_xfan, Bobby SO needs a good spiking. this ending did feel a little rushed, but it was definitely in keeping with the pace you set for the entire story. I really dug it that Logan finally told her he loved her. His promise to take care of her in the face of the coming opposition was a nice touch AND it sort of leaves the door open for a sequel--don't ya think? --Wendie

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2010 8:57:18 AM Title: The Hospital

Liked the story, it definitely moved along at a lightening quick pace, almost too fast at some times for my taste. Some details could've used to be elaborated on; like "the room"...what room? Cerebro? Yes, a logical conclusion, but telling us outright would have not bogged us down with questions.
And Bobby...did you set out to make him a first class jack ass? If so, you nailed him!! How DARE his lousy, cheating ass call Rogue a whore!! I would have let Logan have at his sorry butt, 3 feet of adamantium would be too quick and too easy for the conniving SOB. And I totally agree with Wendie...HA HA on him that his little diamond shaped handcuffs didn't HOLD Rogue like he'd thought they would!
A nice start, I look forward to more good things from you!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 5:07:28 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved it. xXx

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