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Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 9:57:34 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Yay! He saved her... But why did Jubilee blame him?

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 9:57:33 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Yay! He saved her... But why did Jubilee blame him?

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 5:14:13 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Christ, I'm balling my damned eyes out over here! Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 4:06:25 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

You are effing terrifying. Scared the pants right off of me. I knew she was messed, but I never saw this coming.

~Mia

Author's Response: Didn't mean to scare you. ;) More coming soon...

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 2:13:47 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

You know, this chapter reminded me of the movies The horsemen.

Author's Response: Interesting...I don't know the movie, so I'm assuming the Horsemen are of the Apocalypse? Because the title quote is of course about Death, but I didn't work in Famine, Plague and Pestilence. ;) Either way, nice pickup!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 1:31:57 PM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

You fixed it! :DDD This was maybe my favorite chapter so far, I don't even know. I can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Well, I'm working on fixing it. There's still a ways to go. ;) But more will be coming soon!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 11:22:45 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

YAY!! He came back! He saved her!! YAY!!!
More please!

Author's Response: He did! Three cheers for Logan!rnrnOkay, more soon.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 6:59:16 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

I don't know if I can stand another life-or-death cliffhanger, but I live in hope. I am so glad he got there in time to save her. Now, please save him... --Wendie

Author's Response: Okay, I'll work on that. Thank you for continuing!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 5:36:15 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

wow I knew it! I just knew it! Thats so sad! I love how desperate Logan was that she get better. I don't think marie will be happy to be alive though. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for all the nice comments, and for letting me know what you liked! More coming soon, promise.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 4:10:24 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

god, i hope Rogue punishes the shit outta him for putting her through this!

but at the same time i wish she'd been stronger...but in this story she can't be, not after what she'd been through when he found her. :(

love this story anyways, even though it breaks my heart!

Author's Response: She'll probably think of a few things to put him through in return.rnrnThank you so much!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 1:57:28 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

damn u i have to wait til tomorrow or the day after to read what happens? u just made this story good again, keep goin

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 1:29:08 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Ahh & all is right in the fanfic world...well, not entirely, but we're getting there right? Guys? *crickets*

I heart me some Jubilee & this is a perfect example of why. No trite characterization (re: popping gum, yellow overload, chica this, chica that). What you wrote was necessary & still felt like her. Same with the chapter w/ her & Logan in the bar.

Anyway - loved this. The whole "New Orleans. A warm mountain field. *Your face*." Sigh. I have a sneaking suspicion we're going to be belly crawling through some angst soon w/ this aftermath. Will he stick around this time?

Author's Response: I love Jubes too. (She might visit again later, if needed...) As far as the rest of your questions, well..stick around, we'll find out.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 12:57:13 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Its all down to timing at this point isn't it? Will he get there or won't he?

Author's Response: All I know is your timing is 'within seconds of hitting post'. How do you DO that?

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