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Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:21:26 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

Another good chapter...liked hearing about some of the paintings!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 9:40:53 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

Gosh, wheres Logan????

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:14:43 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 5:04:21 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

What has that woman got planned???? Dammit! I love Kitty's perspective. I love it even more that she and Peter are finding their way to each other. You captured her youth--and the odd wisdom of it--very well. I like how you moved the story forward--a bit--through Kitty's voice and the conversation with Jubes, but I'm hanging on by a thread here--Where the hell is Logan? And if Rogue is planning what I think she's planning, he better hurry his ass up! I'm all in, hook, line and sinker, but c'mon already. I'm getting a little...uh...what's the Yiddish word for crazy?...mushuganah or something like that? --Wendie

Author's Response: We're all a little meshugenah around here, so you fit right in. I'm also glad you see this as moving the story forward. This is not one of those 'Mutant Act as Holocaust' stories, just so you know, so I always worry that this sort of chapter is a cul-de-sac. But I couldn't give it up, 'cause Kitty is just one of my favorite characters and, well, I like it.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 4:05:10 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

i am still confused as to what exactly is going through marie's/Rogue's head but with each chapter i get a little bit more insight. I like that. update soon!

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