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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2010 12:08:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOL! awesome smutty cherry buster SummerSky! once you do it once it gets easier i promise LOL!

love it!

dangit, i might have to break my vow of finishing another story before i contribute to this round robin!

Author's Response: I know I have 3 that I need to finish. I felt sorry for the friend I work with who said what are you writing this time and of course my answer was smut her face was priceless.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 9:33:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

for your first time, it was great.

can't wait to read more in this series.

Author's Response: How about read and write. It's a fun thing to now sit back and watch where others will take it.rn

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 1:24:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is extremely good for your first piece of smut! And I'd be late for just about anything to be in that chair with the heap of gorgeousness that is Logan! x

Author's Response: I know but I don't think my boss would believe the excuse

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 11:08:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Its good, you have a couple of misspellings you might want to go take care of but otherwise its is done well. The last line slays me. :)

Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling very tired when I wrote this actually had it rated a g thank god I fixed that. The last line was the first thing that came to me and it leaves it open for someone else to carry on if they so wish.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 11:00:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another great addition to the series. "Buy some ear plugs, One-Eye." HAHAHAHAHA! And I agree with Anami, I think Scott is jealous of Logan, always has been. Scott has all he can handle keeping Jean interested in him, while Logan has every female in the mansion lusting after him to one degree or another. Or is that just me projecting...? --Wendie

Author's Response: I think we're all projecting the same thing. Wow it's hard to write one story then let others take it where they want thanks for the great challenge.

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 9:09:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Mostly it's because Scott is a tool. =)

Super job on this.....felt very comfortable, very natural.

Author's Response: Nah I love Scott glad you liked it

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 8:53:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Is it just me, or is Scott kind of jealous? Because he can't make Jean scream the way Marie screams in Logan's arms. And because Jean is so into Logan it's sickening.

Author's Response: Maybe Scott wants Rogue although I wont be writting that one ewwwwww.

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